One Word Poems: A Discussion

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Clarity
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Sat Oct 06, 2018 3:41 pm
Clarity says... · Sat Oct 06, 2018 3:41 pm
One Word Poems

I've moved One Word Poems to the Writing Activities forum. This thread is now for any discussion regarding the poems we're creating!

At the end of each poem we make we can have a discussion about it in here :)

Happy writing!
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

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Mon Oct 08, 2018 11:13 pm
alliyah says... · Mon Oct 08, 2018 11:13 pm
I keep contemplating putting another word in the poem, but can't settle on one that seems like it fits.

"night" -> would set up a rhyme scheme with "light" so maybe should be avoided

and

"sky" and "horizon" seem too small if we're talking about something going across like "apocalyptic galaxies"
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
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Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:10 pm
Clarity says... · Tue Oct 09, 2018 4:10 pm
Hmmm, I see the struggle. Maybe something that relates to a constellation?
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