Just a quick note that I'm using this as my Camp NaNo project this year! As a result, you can find general griping about Camp NaNo, pacing, plot, etc. over in my Camp NaNo thread. I'll still be posting major workovers and open questions here!
I'll also be posting a snippet every day in my Camp NaNo thread, so if you're interested in seeing random little chunks taken out of the story, check that out!
