Fantasy, Science Fiction and Short Story Reviews [Closed]

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R2TheR
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Tue Jan 13, 2015 3:40 am
R2TheR says... · Tue Jan 13, 2015 3:40 am
Hey if you're still reviewing I'd appreciate you looking at this:
"Big Brother" - An Apocalyptic Mystery & Thriller

It's a post-apocalyptic mystery thriller.
Cheers!




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JohnLocke1
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Tue Jan 13, 2015 3:52 am
JohnLocke1 says... · Tue Jan 13, 2015 3:52 am
I'll have your review up in the next few days, my friend!
"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke




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yizhongt
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Mon Mar 09, 2015 3:21 am
yizhongt says... · Mon Mar 09, 2015 3:21 am
Hello, yizhongt here. I'm not sure whether this thread is still active, but I have a few chapters of a novel I'm currently working on posted, so it would ne great if I could get a few reviews and comments.

Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue and Chapter 1
Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1

Celestial: Spark of War; Chapter 2
Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1

Thank you in advance, and Cheers !!

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As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality