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Okay, I lied - they're not free at all. You've got to hand in ALL THE COOKIES YOU HAVE!!
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Anyway, I'm new here and I thought I'd review some peoples works before I post anything just to get familiar with how things are done here, so yeah... post away :)
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Woot! First person! Hey there and welcome to YWS. I'm technically as well (this is a new account; I've been on here before) so let's explore this mysterious land of YWS together. :)
I have a rather lengthy (ish?) piece to keep you busy... http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106472
Thanks in advance.
~TWS




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He could you review my prologue and my first chapter. It is long (i know) and I personally hate prologues but trust me, it gets interesting fast. I do ask that you maybe wait to review the context until you finish reading all of it. You'll see :) Anyway, thanks a ton.

The Necromancer: Prologue




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I've reviewed your stories :)

(Though I still need my cookie - Hmph! Meanies!)

:P
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If you review this Quest Unable Chapter One (Rough Draft)

I'll even throw in a brownie for good measure.




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@ShortBus I'm done :)
I DEMAND that cookie / brownie now. Yes, I'm a very greedy pig. :P

btw guys, I'm on a weeks hiatus (exams! *teardrop*), so it'll take a while to resume reviewing.
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I don't need a review but you seemed sad so I brought you cookies! (>^_^)> (: :) (: :) (: :) (: :)
And passersby who heard his echoing laughter wondered what kind of grief man had to go through before he could laugh so free.




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Aww Thank you so much <3
That's so sweet of you :D
*hug*
Let's share the cookies ^^
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Gay Rights in Russia

Hi! Welcome to YWS :)
This is an article I wrote about Gay Rights in Russia. I'd appreciate any criticisms, whether major flaws or nitpicks, and I just am not sure if I've invoked Godwin's Law or it's kind of justified..?
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I'm done ^^ It was a very good read! I demand my cookie as payment now :P
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Welcome! I'd simply love if you reviewed either The Partly Fictitious Rise of the Gaian Empire (Science Fiction) or Splendor (Fantasy). Thank you very much! *hands over a freshly baked chocolate chip cookie*



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