FireFox's Review Barn

Alrighty, guys. I am starting this thread because I find that reviewing helps me to write better. It helps me to discover what I do and don't like to read (and write) and what types of writing "works" for me and what doesn't. Hence, why I started this thread. I think it would be easier to list the things that I will not review, being that it is a shorter list than what I will review:

I Will Not Review:
-Science Fiction
-Romance
-Fan Fiction (Harry Potter Fan Fiction is the exception!)
-Fantasy

There ya' go! Have at it, ya'll! Oh, and if you're wondering about payment, it's your choice. I accept points (any number of points), reviews (that would be my preferred choice), a nice little message on my wall, or anything you can come up with, really!

So, post a link below and I will get started!

-FireFox

Change Starts With Action Chapters 1 and 2 It is kind of long, but a review would be very helpful for me. I will give you some points and future reviews.

Review is done, @Hsarver!

No fantasy? How about historical fiction? (nonfiction, not sure) If so, here ya go! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106196

I will review anything except for most fanfiction. So if anyone needs a review, let me know!

Hello Firefox! Could you review this for me, please?
... and the Water Whispers Words
much appreciated dude.