Judgement Day

It is Judgement Day here at Young Writers Society.

1) I will decide to give you my approval with a like. The criteria is I have to like it! All bias aside if you have made art with your words you will get my approval.
2) I will have a content section of the review, and a structure section
3) I will rate your writing like this:
content: X/6
I will sometimes do Impact under content, depends on each piece.
Structure:X/6
-comment here why you got your score
Emotion:X/6
-comment

Thank you !

I do not offer extensive nit-picking
Accepting any request but novels may take a while to read!




Your hero,
ImHero

Hi, so I noticed that you have been studying Poe and other poets and I was wondering if you would review this.

It is a ballad inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's "Annabel Lee" and I am quite new to poetry, this is only the second poem I have sat down and seriously written. So I would love it if you could give me some pointers and tell me how to improve as a poet.

C'mon people! ..taps foot..

The Falling Sky This could stand another review. People don't seem to recognize the Villanelle still.

Thanks for the review ImHero! I totally didn't notice that I had 11 syllables for the second repeat line DX I counted them like 5 times and every time I came up with ten XD

Welcome @Aley

..now, if only I had some more reviews...