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I haven't reviewed in a while and I want to get back into it.

The only thing I won't review is poetry. I am the worst poet in the world and trust me when I say, you don't want my opinion on your poems. Short stories are preferred, but I will also review novels and any other miscellanies work.

My reviews will usually have a combination of nitpicks and an overall view. I try to not only look at the way it's written, but the characters, plot, etc, too. If there's something you want me to specifically look at, just let me know!

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Last edited by confetti on Sat Sep 22, 2012 5:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Done!
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If you could read and review this I would be very grateful ^^
work.php?id=97448

Thanks~
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Done.
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Hey there, confetti, I have quite a challenge for you...

Would you mind checking out what I have so far of my novel? I've edited the chapters after the reviews I've already gotten, but I still think they need a lot of work so I'd appreciate another opinion.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

If that's too much, don't worry, just review one of them instead. Please and thank you! :)
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d-o-n-e
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I would be eternally grateful for a review of my short A Heroin Laced Love Story http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95536




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done~
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Hey,

Can I have a review on this please,

work.php?id=97760

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done like dinner
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Please? :) work.php?id=97947
But they all didn’t see the little bit of sadness in me.




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Would love a nitpicky review to this~ I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you :)

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work.php?id=98077

Please Doc, Its urgent!! SHE'S A ZOMBIE!

haha, I would appreciate some in put on this.
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