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Heya, good of you to visit!

Been a bit slow on getting back into reviewing, so force me into it, please.

I'll review any short story or novel. Expect a thought-out, detailed review with a little humor thrown into the mix. I don't mean to brag, but I don't do things half-assedly.

I'll get to the reviews as fast I can manage, but if you request thirty chapters' worth of reviews, it would be healthy to bear in mind that it'll take a while.

And hmph. If you really must insist, I can bend to poetry, but don't expect anything major or overwhelmingly insightful. I can tell when a poem sounds good and most of the time can find a reason for why it doesn't if it doesn't, but that's the extent of my knowledge on that. Ask for poetry reviews at your own risk. *shrugs*

So. Stories. Novels. Even poetry. Post the link, if you wish a review.
Last edited by WaitingForLife on Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:53 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Do your worst.

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EDIT: Review was thorough and very helpful. +1
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Hey Ait!

This is chapter five of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97541

A review would be greatly appreciated! :D

(The previous chapters are in the same folder, if you want some background)

Thanks.

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sorry for the delay, I've been busy! Tackling your chapter nows.
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Short story review request! Would love a nitpicky review to this~ I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you very much.

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Aaalrighty.
Call me crazy; I prefer 'enjoys life while one can'.
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The pen's mightier than the sword - especially when it's wielded by a flipmothering dragon.
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I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
— Anna Held