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Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:32 am

Jas says... · Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:32 am

Hi world!

I want to review your story!

I'll review anything prose except:

Fantasy
Science Fiction
Non-fiction

My reviews:

I normally give a brief summary, then I quote sentences and parts I liked and didn't like, explain my problems with them, do character and plot analysis then finish with another summary and a final grade.

Here are a few links to some of my prose reviews:

Novels-

The Diamond Fist by AhmedBlues

Bach's Lullaby by Trigger

Short stories-

Skeleton Girl by ancientforever

Two Weeks, One by thatoddkid

Other-

Daffodils by Jelly

K, so link me and I'll review asap! :]

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

GoldenQuill

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Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:42 am

GoldenQuill says... · Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:42 am

Hay buddy!
Mind reviewing a poem?
It's called Sense.
Thanks! :}

formerly ZlyWilk

Finally achieving my dreams. Dive into a unique horror story.

thetraveler

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Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:01 am

thetraveler says... · Wed Jan 25, 2012 4:01 am

Hey do you mind reviewing this poem I wrote?
[url]viewtopic.php?f=196&t=92939[/url]
Thanks!
Cheers,
thetraveler

"Elementary, my dear Watson"

Spoiler

SPOILED!!!

Jas

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Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:02 am

Jas says... · Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:02 am

Done with both!

Anyone need a review? :]

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Jas

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Mon Jan 30, 2012 1:22 am

Jas says... · Mon Jan 30, 2012 1:22 am

Bummmp. Anyone need a review?

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Jas

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Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:44 am

Jas says... · Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:44 am

Anyone?

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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

DragonGirl11

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Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:22 pm

DragonGirl11 says... · Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:22 pm

Hey Jas! Do you do chapters? If so, could you please review this?Chapter 1
And, if you'd like, Chapter 2

Thank you! (If not, that's alright, have a nice day

)

~*~

"You could look at the raindrops on your window, or you could look through the window and see the rainbow."

~K.C. Oxford

<YWS>

Jas

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Tue Mar 06, 2012 12:26 am

Jas says... · Tue Mar 06, 2012 12:26 am

I've done chapter one and I'll do number 2 tonight!

Anyone else?

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

thebookworm

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Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:45 pm

thebookworm says... · Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:45 pm

Could you review my short story? work.php?id=93844 And my poem? work.php?id=93847

"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me

mrmotley

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Wed Mar 07, 2012 12:38 am

mrmotley says... · Wed Mar 07, 2012 12:38 am

Could you review mine please

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93852

Jas

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Mon May 28, 2012 4:07 pm

Jas says... · Mon May 28, 2012 4:07 pm

Open again!

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~