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A Sestina Challenge

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  1. Greetings fellow poets! Here's your newest challenge for those who art brave enough! Try writing a sestina!

    A sestina is made of 7 stanzas. In the first 6 stanzas there are 6 lines, with the last word of every line rotating between 6 words in a specific word. The last stanza has 3 lines.

    (The letters represent the last word of each line, and are non-rhyming)

    Stanza 1: A, B, C, D, E, F
    Stanza 2: F, A, E, B, D, C
    Stanza 3: C, F, D, A, B, E
    Stanza 4: E, C, B, F, A, D
    Stanza 5: D, E, A, C, F, B
    Stanza 6: B, D, F, E, C, A
    Stanza 7: Then the last stanza is three lines either E, C, A or A, C, E (and traditionally would include the words from B, D, F in those three lines as well in some order)


    This site has an example and color-coded directions:
    How to Write a Sestina: Exercise Poetry
    This site has more examples: Poetry Foundation: Sestina

    Here's an example I did for NaPo this year: (I sort of fudged some of the words by changing word beginnings or endings)
    Spoiler

    i find myself sometimes afraid
    of starless nights
    where the sky is unbroken
    and all that separates
    the earth from the heavens
    is left to my imagination and

    the horizon seems far and empty and
    i wonder if God is ever afraid
    to touch the earth from the heavens
    when this doubt and fear fills my night.
    Does He ever contemplate separation?
    Can someone whole love someone so broken?

    Cracked bodies and hearts broken
    much too far to be fixed, and
    i find myself wanting to separate
    out the good and the bad, but I'm afraid
    there'd be nothing left, like the empty night.
    So I look up beyond stardust towards heaven

    and pray that there's a God in heaven
    who remembers His Son's broken
    body, who lay three days and nights
    who gave his life for my own and
    loves me even when i find myself afraid.
    No, all my failings must not truly separate

    me even when the stars have separated
    from their designated place in the heavens
    and the world doesn't make sense and i'm afraid,
    surely even then, God loves me though broken.
    for He knows what it is to die and
    knows what it is to miss the sun in the night.

    For God created the sun and stars that hide tonight
    he tooks the waters and land and separated
    them to form earth and sea and
    molding out clay chosen from the heavens
    He made me, in His image, unbroken
    and whispers that i do not need to be afraid.

    His words echo in my ears and i feel now less afraid.
    For i believe tonight even when the sky appears unbroken
    that my unseparated God is not only bound to the heavens.



    Best of luck in your writing! I believe in you! :)


Life is a banana peel and I am the fool who dared to tread on it.
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