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141,302 Literary Works • 674,338 Reviews
While you are an absolutely amazing author, there are a few issues with your writing. I feel like it is my duty to point out these errors in hopes that you can fix them later on. If you cannot, then I understand.
1. [I]Your writing is too good.[i] For a writer around your age the grammar mistakes are minimal, and I have nothing to look down on or laugh at. I cannot cackle at a wrong use of 'to/too/two'. Nor can I guffaw at an incorrect use of 'there/their/they're'.
2. [I]You have successfully made me cry.[i] Not many authors can make me curl up into a ball and rethink everything. Congratulations, I have shed many tears while reading your book. You have joined the ranks of IamTraunt, RoyalHighness, and Elizabeth Moon. All of these writers I have given my utmost respect, and now you may have some.
3. [I]The characters are excellent.[i] I have said this before, but I will say this again: I love your characters and the realisticness of them makes me want to do a happy dance, and cry tears of joy. This needs to be fixed. No characters should make me want to do that.
You may not be able to fix these, but if you can it would be greatly appreciated.
~Rae