Welcome to my castle, lonely traveler. How nice of you to drop by. Would you like some tea or--- a review, per chance?
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Charge? Don't be silly, I'm royalty. What could I possibly want from you?
I dug this up from the Royal Records:
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What can the empress critique? Everthing, my veins are full of blue blood and my lineage includes the greatest names the history of humanity. And you have the gall to ask me what I can critique.
word usage,
sentence fluency,
punctuation
vocabulary.
character development
plot
If your interested in my expertise, please write me a note like the one below, and give it to me or one of my advisors. I'd be happy to assist.
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Could you please tell me ifIhavetoomanyrunonsentences?
Thanx
Please, please please give me something to critique! It's terribly boring here, in my royal chambers, and the castle is a lonely place.
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