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Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:53 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Hi June! :D
Sorry to inundate you with requests, they're all chapters of the same novel. And you can take your time! xD

Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven

Thank you June! You rock! And seriously, if you can't find time to do them, you definately don't have to.

-Sarah
xxx
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:34 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



topic41312.html
'tis only 400 words and is in other fiction *pleads*
xD
xoxo
for what are we without words and stories?





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Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:44 pm
Juniper says...



xD Ooh guys! I haven't check this in forever. I thought it died!

Anyways, I'm on them =D
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 1:32 am
Adnamarine says...



Hey darlin! If you're too backed up, don't worry about this in any hurry, but care to look at a poem for me? post489350.html#489350

No need to rush too terribly because I'm gonna be gone for a week, starting tomorrow, so just whenever you get to it.

And I would love to return the favor! Just post in my 'review for food' thread. xD


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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:10 pm
anti-pop says...



Oh! I'll have a Juniper Berry!

Title: Shine Bright, Little Baby
Genre: Lyric Poetry
A poem for my brand-new baby cousin. I'm trying to get it as perfected as humanly possible! ^_^
topic42415.html

*anti-pop
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changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

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Thu Jan 22, 2009 7:17 pm
asxz says...



I have a piece in Action/Adventure, its the first chapter in my book, and it's the first book I've posted on YWS. Here are the parts, and the prologue:

Prolugue topic42174.html
Chapter 1 part 1 topic42365.html
Chapter 1 part 2 topic42409.html

Could you please be as harsh as you can, but no comments on leaving you in the dark please, I already know that! You can post your entire review in the part 2 thread if you want, or do an individual one for all, whatever floats your boat!

-Thank you!
::XoX::KeepWriting::XoX::

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Mon May 25, 2009 8:26 pm
Juniper says...



Reopened 5/25/09. Please read first post before posting.





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Mon May 25, 2009 8:36 pm
lakegirls says...



Deleted. Thinking about publishing.

Love,
N
Last edited by lakegirls on Thu May 28, 2009 11:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon May 25, 2009 9:15 pm
Juniper says...



Alright lakegirls! I'm on it. =D Might take me a day or so to finish. :D
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Sat May 30, 2009 4:02 am
Mira says...



I would love it if you could review a fanfic that I wrote this week! :)

Title: The Greatest Battle in the History of YWS (or something very, very close to that... Sorry if I can't remember exactly. It's a long title...)
Genre: Fan Fiction
Rating: I didn't put one, but I'd rate it as PG. :)
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic48602.html

Thanks a bunches, June! :)

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Sat May 30, 2009 9:50 pm
Juniper says...



Done, Saphy! ;)
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Sat May 30, 2009 10:01 pm
Sins says...



Hey x
Could you please review the first chapter of my fiction?
Thanks in advance :D
Yours truly,

Meg xoxo

topic48621.html
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:58 pm
Threnody says...



Hi!!!

Can you please review this poem for me? Be as harsh as you feel appropriate.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51214.html

Title: Rise
Rating: None, but if I had rated it PG, and if you really think about what it could mean and add little scenarios of your own it could be PG-13. (R if you get really creative.) But overall, it's clean.
Genre: (Melo)Dramatic Poetry :)

Thanks!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

P.S. I'm getting so confused with the numerous name changes. I'm going to have to keep better track...
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Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:55 am
Carlito says...



Title: Another Day
Genre: Lyrics
Link: topic50994.html

Please tear it apart. You may be as evil (or not evil) as you wish :)

Thanks :)

-Carly
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Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:16 am
pinkangel54123 says...



Luna 2
Action/Adventure Fiction
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post580046.html?highlight=#580046
You're gonna want to read Luna 1 first you don't have to review it, but you certainly can.

Here's the link for Luna 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50230.html
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