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Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:15 pm
Carlito says...



I'm leaving for vacation soon and will be gone for a week. I'm taking my computer with me so there is a chance I will be able to review but there is also a chance I won't be able to so Rydia and Ace, sorry in advance for the wait. (Others can still feel free to request reviews but you may have to wait a little while for your lengthy critique) :)
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Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:44 pm
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Rydia is done!! I can totally still review right now on my phone. I've got a long car ride to kill so ask away!! :)
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Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:51 pm
BerlynnRae says...



Hey, I was wondering if you woud be willing to review my novel "Ghost of Theater Two" I have the prologue, first and second chapters done and they need LOTS of help. Thanks so much!
~Berlynn Rae

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Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:25 am
coldandlonely says...



Hey! If you don't mind, could you review the first chapter of my little boredom project?

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Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:25 pm
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Ace's novel is done. Berlynn you're next! :)
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Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:30 pm
Kadie says...



Hi, I'd really appreciate a review on the first chapter of my new story.

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It's only short but I haven't written anything for a long time so I'm very rusty, also I'd like to know if the idea is at all interesting to you.

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Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:44 pm
mihaivisan says...



hey, i got two short stories which seems to be having a bit of trouble getting reviews.

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pick one or feel free to read both, and give me your input.
thanks!
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Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:10 pm
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Berlynn and coldandlonely are done! Kadie and mihaivisan are next. Thanks for waiting :)
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 4:27 pm
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Hello! The semester is almost over so I am back and taking requests for a short time only (probably until mid-January) so request away! :)
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Tue Dec 25, 2012 1:42 am
pahoem says...



Hello! A review for my prologue on my fantasy romance novel would be soooo greatly appreciated! Thanks so much!

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Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:42 pm
RylieJane says...



Hello,

I am new to this site and I have written two poems. If you would be willing to review them, I would really appreciate it :)

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Mon Jun 08, 2015 6:17 pm
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Re-open and ready for fun!
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Fri Jun 12, 2015 12:15 pm
artybirdy says...



@Carlito

I have a short story I posted yesterday, and I would love some feedback on it.
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Thanks!
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Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:30 pm
cookie64 says...



Please review :D

The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~

Thank you :)
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