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Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:22 pm
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Charlie II says...



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I totally had one of these before, once upon a time. But rather than dig up a thread that dates back to 2008, I think it's about time I made a brand new shiny one! :wink:

  • I'll review anything: pictures, poetry, and prose. I can't give an expert opinion on artwork, but for what it's worth I'll give you my general impressions and say what I can.
  • I won't write line-by-line critiques. You're all more than capable of using correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Instead I'll give my impressions on three areas that I feel need focus in your work -- if there is anything in particular that you'd like me to focus on then please make that clear in this thread.
  • I will find something constructive to say. I won't be mean, but I won't shower you in unhelpful adoration either.
  • Reasonable chapter lengths are preferred -- I'm a flighty character and can be easily scared away by a huge chunk of text. But if you give me enough time then I'm sure to get round to it eventually.
  • Finally, if you link me to chapters of a novel, please let me review them in order, starting from the beginning. I'd only make lots of annoying comments like: "Who's this guy? What's he doing? Why did she do that? Help!" and that's not much use to anyone.
N.B. As I haven't posted anything in a while there's no need to repay me with a review in return! But the moment I do, I'll update this thread just in case you guys feel you'd like to return the favour.


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Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:51 pm
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Jas says...



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Can I get a review on that? Thanks! :D
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:24 am
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Dreamwalker says...



You review poetry I see :)

Is this up your alley?

If so, I will gladly review in return ^_^
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Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:30 am
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Lumi says...



I'll repay you in sweet whispers and all my lovin'. Also, a honeymoon.

Right here, bb.

Don't read the other reviews. I want an unbridled Charlie attack, despite the others.
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romance otaku says...



I am posting a chapter of my dark romantic tragedy novella a day for the next week. I'd love it if you would review it~

Here's chapter 1: post902805.html
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Priceless says...



Hello!
Please review my fantasy short story (contemporary, vampire...thing) : topic86215.html
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YouWishYouHadThis says...



I like This hahahah nice stuff ;)
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joshuapaul says...



charlie old boy

topic87682.html

for you.
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:20 am
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Charlie II says...



And I'm up-to-date! Any more requests? 8)
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Shinda says...



Cheers! =) Here's the link : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic87920.html
Thanks a lot in advance! =)

Best regards,
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Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:27 am
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Charlie II says...



And done!
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Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:00 pm
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Jas says...



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You can pretend it's a short story. :]

Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:17 am
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Azila says...



I've heard you're good.

This is a new direction for me and I'm looking for feedback.

When you get a chance. :}




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Charlie II says...



That brings me up-to-date! Next, please! :D
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Rosey Unicorn says...



I would love it if you looked at both parts of the opening scene of my novel. The scene was so long I had to split it up in a bit of a weird way, so if you could read both parts before commenting I'd appreciate it. Feel free to breakup your review however you like.
You know you're a writer when you're not alarmed at hearing voices in your head, you can't read a book without analyzing it for plot & characters and you consider something you nearly killed yourself to write the most rewarding.

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