Young Writers Society

All LiteraryBlogs Books Clubs Forums Green Room People Poetry Shorts Storybooks

Home » Forums » Resources » Will Review For Food

1, 2

JP's reviews.

Post a reply

Gender:

Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:07 am

joshuapaul says...

Not accepting for a short while.

Reviewed:
- less than 3000 words
- short stories
- first chapters of novels

Not reviewed
- Poetry
- Full Novels

It's simple, really.

JP

Last edited by joshuapaul on Tue Nov 08, 2011 5:10 pm, edited 4 times in total.

#TNT

Read my latest

Gender:

Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:28 am

View Likes

mikepyro says...

ir you're not too busy I'd really apreciate a review for the first chapter of my novel Animal.

Gender:

Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:18 pm

View Likes

Priceless says...

Hiya,
I'd really appreciate a review of the first chapter of my novel (Romance): post889219.html#p889219

Thank you!!

We're all a little weird. And life's a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.

Gender:

Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:23 am

joshuapaul says...

Done and done.

Keep 'em coming.

#TNT

Read my latest

Gender:

Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:45 pm

DarthAJ says...

Hey could you please review Chapter 1 of my new planned short novel The Shuji Tower. I'm writing this to have fun and to also get practice in writing as I haven't really written much.

post898766.html#p898766

Thanks!

Gender:

Sun Aug 21, 2011 5:38 pm

LiteraryInk says...

Hello,

If you have the time, could you review my first chapter of my romance novel? I'm aiming to get published and any feedback would be helpful. Thank you!

Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=86021

Though no one can go back and make a brand new start, anyone can start from now and make a brand new ending. ~Author Unknown

Gender:

Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:52 pm

Priceless says...

Me again! I'm sorry, but you're an awesome reviewer.

Please look at my romance short story, I really have a problem with it but I can't identify what's wrong with it.

viewtopic.php?t=86380

We're all a little weird. And life's a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.

Gender:

Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:08 pm

joshuapaul says...

Okay, I will get through yours soon Priceless. Just had a read over.

#TNT

Read my latest

Gender:

Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:12 am

joshuapaul says...

All done. Next?

#TNT

Read my latest

Gender:

Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:02 am

Phoenix23 says...

Hi JP,
Can you please review my story viewtopic.php?t=87624 . I will be grateful for the help. Cheers, Phoenix23

If you are a dreamer, come in,
If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,
A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer...
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire
For we have some flax-golden tales to spin.
Come in!
Come in!
- Shel Silverstein

Gender:

Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:30 pm

Audy says...

Hello,

I'd appreciate any feedback on this, as it would be helpful. Rip it to shreds! Thanks

'Tis the season! Donate your poetry.

Gender:

Tue Sep 27, 2011 2:31 am

Jas says...

viewtopic.php?t=87281

I'd really like some super harsh critique on this. I've gotten a lot of great reviews but nothing that was complete honest and harsh. I hope you can help me with that. :]

Thanks!

~Jas

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Gender:

Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:13 am

joshuapaul says...

Done. Done. Done.

#TNT

Read my latest

Gender:

Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:32 am

Jas says...

viewtopic.php?t=87719

Thank you :]

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

Gender:

Sun Oct 02, 2011 3:19 am

tronks says...

viewtopic.php?t=88275

Hello! If you have the time, thanks!

1, 2