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Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:07 am
joshuapaul says...



Not accepting for a short while.

Reviewed:
- less than 3000 words
- short stories
- first chapters of novels

Not reviewed
- Poetry
- Full Novels

It's simple, really.

JP
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Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:28 am
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mikepyro says...



ir you're not too busy I'd really apreciate a review for the first chapter of my novel Animal. :)




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Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:18 pm
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Priceless says...



Hiya,
I'd really appreciate a review of the first chapter of my novel (Romance): post889219.html#p889219

Thank you!!
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Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:23 am
joshuapaul says...



Done and done.

Keep 'em coming.
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Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:45 pm
DarthAJ says...



Hey could you please review Chapter 1 of my new planned short novel The Shuji Tower. I'm writing this to have fun and to also get practice in writing as I haven't really written much.

post898766.html#p898766

Thanks!




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Sun Aug 21, 2011 5:38 pm
LiteraryInk says...



Hello,

If you have the time, could you review my first chapter of my romance novel? I'm aiming to get published and any feedback would be helpful. Thank you!

Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=86021
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:52 pm
Priceless says...



Me again! I'm sorry, but you're an awesome reviewer. :P Please look at my romance short story, I really have a problem with it but I can't identify what's wrong with it. :? viewtopic.php?t=86380
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:08 pm
joshuapaul says...



Okay, I will get through yours soon Priceless. Just had a read over.
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Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:12 am
joshuapaul says...



All done. Next?
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:02 am
Phoenix23 says...



Hi JP,
Can you please review my story viewtopic.php?t=87624 . I will be grateful for the help. Cheers, Phoenix23
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 4:30 pm
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Audy says...



Hello,

I'd appreciate any feedback on this, as it would be helpful. Rip it to shreds! Thanks :)




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Tue Sep 27, 2011 2:31 am
Jas says...



viewtopic.php?t=87281

I'd really like some super harsh critique on this. I've gotten a lot of great reviews but nothing that was complete honest and harsh. I hope you can help me with that. :]

Thanks!

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:13 am
joshuapaul says...



Done. Done. Done.
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Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:32 am
Jas says...



viewtopic.php?t=87719

Thank you :]
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Sun Oct 02, 2011 3:19 am
tronks says...



viewtopic.php?t=88275

Hello! If you have the time, thanks!