http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic44529.html Please review this! I desperately need some reviews on it before I start the second part. I don't have any special requests on the type of review - just do whatever you think needs to be done or you feel comfortable with. Thanks a bunches!
topic44823.html The first thing I've written in months, I'm rather proud of it, but I'm sure once everyone's torn it to pieces it won't be quite as good as I initially thought. I'm so glad that I've finally written something though. xD
~Kirsten
Lost, I'm technically done, but I did not do a total shred like you probably wanted (I didn't even see your request when I reviewed that) so, if you want me to actually shred it, let me know!
Still have room!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
Thanks again for reviewing my CIA cotest entry - like I said before, your comments were really helpful.
For this reason I'd like to know if you could please review chapter one of Lily Foxglove. It's in other fiction. I've actually already finished writing the whole book but I'm re-re-editing it lol and I'm kind of stuck...your opinion will be greatly appreciated!
So, just a note to say I will be closed for the next week. Once the 17th roles around I'll be open again, but for now I won't be accepting any more requests.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
[while trapped in a bucket of popcorn] You know what the worst part is? It's not even butter. We're gonna be destroyed by... ARTIFICIAL FLAVORING! — Blake Bradley, Power Rangers Ninja Storm
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