Young Writers Society

Hey June.

It's a poem- but you don't have to write anything very long in terms of review. I'd just appreciate some comments on how well it reads and what you think.

Thanks very much.

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Here's one that I'm not too sure if it's good or not. Please help.
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Hey Rosey, dear! How are you doing? ^_^

I figured, since the war is over (and we won, thanks to you), you'd be out of work! But you have many requests, here. xD
I guess I didn't actually believed you would be standing still.
Anyway, I was wondering if you could review two poems of mine. If you would get to do one it's ok
Can I brake? and Do not write to me

Thanks!
*Kat*

Lethro- Since werewolf stories are things I don't do, I passed you off to Antigone Cadmus. I hope you enjoyed her review.

Eimear- You are done!

Teddy and Kat- I'll get your requests finished soon!

Rosey!

You're great at getting to the reviews quickly! This one I'd like to reqest a special in depth review if possible. Tear it apart completely. This story is the first of three parts. I'd just like you to review this one at the moment.

What do you hate about it? What do you like? What are my strengths? My weaknesses? Doe sit grasp your interest as reader? Is it boring? Repetitive?

Thanks so much!

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Hey there, I got something for you too!

Name: Rebirth Chapter 1
Link: Here
Summary: Technically, yes, it's a romance but most of it really isn't at all. In fact, the first chapter has absolutely nothing to do with romance. I've only posted Chapter 1, but I've written up to Chapter 6 and I still haven't gotten around to any actual romance. Hehe woops.The first chapter is just a simple intro to my character. I can't really summarize without giving stuff away I'm leaving as a surprise. The name has nothing to do with vampires, promise!

Thanks a million!
-cat4prowl

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Genre ~ Other
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Thanks Rosey.

*Whew* Done all!

Anybody else? (Note- My first page guidelines have changed. I no longer do romance. Please ask Pippiedooda or Mars for a good romance review. Thanks.)

Hey Rosey!
Just reminding you xD
And you don't have to review the whole thing.
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Thanks!

Done Fragile!

Anybody else?

You said you were bored! I already have some fantastic crits on this one, but I'd love one more opinion before the deadline.

Arizona Princess
Other Fiction

I can't really give you an accurate summary, because I'm not quite sure what it's about. A girl and a bartender having a conversation.

El Finito, Evi!

Step on up!

Hello! I have a piece that I just put up that really needs to be ripped to shreds. It may be a bit longer than your guidelines-so stop anytime you want.

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Thanks!!

Hola Senorita!

Here is the link to Sentient II:

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Much thanks in advance.
-Zehra

Hey Rosey

When you get a chance, can you please review, Dreams of Giants, Chapter 4, Part 2?

Here's the link:
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Thanks a bunch! ^_^