After spending hours and hours- we're nearing the finishing line!
I used the suggestions from my rough draft the best I could. Does anyone have more suggestions to polish the piece?
(I know the words are hard to read- they’re metallic so photos don’t pick up well- it says “ALL HER EYES ARE ON YOU SO DON’T MESS IT UP. EVERY MISTAKE SHE’LL REMEMBER FOREVER”)
Also- I really appreciate your kind words- I think I kinda like the piece now!)