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Hello! I practice a different religion, but I still resonated deeply with your poem. I'm always thinking about the uncertainty of my future and thinking all sorts of negative and scary things. My faith helps ground me and reassure me that those are just anxieties. There is a lot of beautiful imagery in this piece; like each stanza is representing a different snapshot of the difficult things in life. It feels both peaceful yet somber at the same time. The poem ends on an uplifting note. It's positive, but it feels like the poem ended a little too soon. I think you can find a lot more to say about faith, really dig deep and show the beauty and protectiveness about it. It's a lovely message, and I appreciate it a lot. Thank you for sharing!
hello, i really enjoyed reading your poem! I'm not Christian, but i always liked to observe litle things and think about the great creator behind them all. fruits for us to eat, water for us to use in many ways, winds, rains, forests and much more made me think about the universe and our creator. It is a beautiful thing to find joy in the simplest things and having faith even in our darkest moments.