Hold it together, birds of a feather,
Nothing but lies and crooked wings.
Hitsugaya saw his whole life pass before his eyes as Aizen stood at the other edge of the room stating how nice it was to see snow this time of year and Hitsugaya fell to the floor with his wings cut off from Aizens attack and blood splattered all over the floor.
I have the answer, spreading the cancer,
You are the faith inside me.
Momo didn’t care if noone believed her.She had the answer for why Captain Aizen had acted like he did.Of course,Gin had to be behind all this.There was no way Captain Aizen would leave her here like this.
No, don't
Leave me to die here,
Help me survive here.
Alone, don't remember, remember.
As momo looked up through tear-filled eyes at the Aizen she had always loved,no words could sum up how she felt at the aching pain in her stomach were her loved captain had slashed her.As she fell to the floor she felt herself pleading with him.Even if no words left her mouth her mind raced as she pleaded with him “please captain aizen,remember all we went through,don’t leave me to die here”
Put me to sleep evil angel.
Open your wings evil angel.
As everyone watched in awe as Aizen changed into yet his third form and
gained three sets of butterfly-like wings. As he fought Ichigo, his wings became more pointed, rather than rounded.
I'm a believer,
Nothing could be worse,
All these imaginary friends.
Hiding betrayal,
Driving the nail,
Hoping to find a savior.
Anyone with two eyes could tell that to Momo Aizen was her life.Anyone could tell that she adored the man and looked up to him like someone would look up to a savior.This disturbed Hitsugaya.
No, don't
Leave me to die here,
Help me survive here.
Alone, don't
Surrender, surrender.
To Momo it felt good being on the battle field again,after so long fighting alongside Rangiku really was a joy.Even more if her opponents were supporters and worshipers of the newly found Aizen.No matter how strong Harribels fraccions were Momo wouldn’t surrender.Momo wouldn’t surrender to Aizen.
Oh.
Fly over me evil angel.
Why can't I breathe evil angel?
Hinamori could do nothing but watch as Hitsugaya stabbed her,and to her she couldn’t tell if it was against his will or if he meant to do it.
“why?”was all she could muster out as Hitsugaya slowly brought her down,gently,from their place up in the air and seemed to practically explode with anger his eyes could show the turmoil inside him.Momo watched as Hitsugaya flung toward Aizen,and how Aizen just as easily cut him down.
Oh.
Fly over me evil angel.
Why can't I breathe evil angel?
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Terrific, beautiful piece of work with no real grammar issues, just keep writing!!!