First Quarter (Chapter's 1-5)

by writerrighter

Published May 19, 2025

16+ Language Mature Content

In First Quarter

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language and mature content.

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First Quarter

The squeak of Eleanor's sneakers on the polished gym floor felt ridiculously loud in the sudden awareness of him. Ethan. The name had been a low, constant hum in the hallways of Clearview High since he'd arrived, always attached to a face that seemed sculpted from shadows and light. Attractive was an epic understatement. The collective sigh of the girls whenever he walked by was practically a weather forecast. Eleanor, though, had mostly stayed on the sidelines of the Ethan-gazing, her own internal weather perpetually cloudy with the drizzle of her mother's memory and the occasional downpour of everything else.

"Okay, new kid, Ethan, you're with... uh... Eleanor," Coach Miller's voice boomed, cutting through the usual gym chaos.

They shuffled over to a patch of empty court, the harsh fluorescent lights above making the shadows under his cheekbones even more pronounced. His backpack, a vibrant splash of earthy colors against the drab floor, lay discarded beside him, the intricate beadwork on his keychains and zippers catching the light like tiny jewels.

A stray volleyball wobbled their way, and he moved with a fluid grace that seemed out of place in the clumsy world of high school gym. He caught it effortlessly and tossed it to her, the worn leather surprisingly warm against her palms. "Guess we're partners," his voice rumbled low, a stark contrast to the shrieking energy of the other students. There was something else in his tone, too, a subtle undercurrent she couldn't quite decipher. An edge; or maybe just the quiet reserve of someone who didn't quite fit here.

"Yeah," Eleanor managed, her voice sounding a little too breathy. She avoided his gaze, suddenly fascinated by the faded blue lines of the gymnasium floor. This was it. Her first real interaction with the Ethan everyone was losing their minds over. And for some reason she couldn't quite name, the usual teenage awkwardness felt different. There was a subtle pull, a current she hadn't expected, stirring beneath the surface of her carefully constructed "don't care" attitude. Ethan served the ball with impressive force. The ball soared over Eleanor's head, hit the wall behind her, and bounced back in front of him. She rolled her eyes, and he gave her a small, amused smile.

“Something funny?” Eleanor asked as they bounced the ball between them. He laughed. His lips barely parted but you could catch a glimpse of his, inconceivably white, sharp canine teeth. His lips were a soft caramel color, slightly lighter than his tanned skin. His hair was kempt in a small bun.

“You’re not like the girls who attack me in the hallways,” he paused. “Are you?”

“No. I am in fact not,” Eleanor said, smiling. A warm feeling crept up on her face, but she kept her composure. Ethan bounced the ball a bit too high, and it rolled to the other nets.

“I got it,” he said. Ethan walked by her and brushed her hand with his. He was extremely hot. Burning, even.

“Ethan, you’re insanely hot,” Eleanor said before he got too far.

He laughed, “I get that a lot.”

“No, I mean your temperature. Are you feeling okay?” Eleanor asked. His eyes flickered left and he smiled.

“Probably all these layers, I’ll take them off in a few,” he said, running to grab the ball. His face shifted to a strange far away look. Shit. Did he think I thought he wasn’t hot? Trust me, he is. Borderline unbelievably hot. He handed her the ball and started taking off his jacket and hoodie. He was in a black tee. A tight one. Her breath hitched and she had to swallow her drool before it became noticeable. Everyone glanced at him, Eleanor even thought their female coach did too. Ethan threw down his jackets on his backpack. He had a charm bracelet with small tribal hand carved charms, and he had another with rounded stones made to look like beads.

“Earlier, I didn’t mean you aren’t hot… you are. I mean, you’re just attractive. I mean you’re not ugly and sorry if it came off that way when I said no,” Eleanor said as she stuttered more than any human should in a sentence. Ever. He laughed and continued hitting the ball back and forth with her.

“Not so bad yourself,” he said with a smug, yet very attractive, smile. Eleanor’s face bloomed in shades of pink and red. She played it off by laughing and thanking him.

She held the ball at her side and picked up her water bottle. “What’s your next period?” Eleanor asked and took a sip.

“Geometry. You?” He said.

“Spanish,” she replied.

He smiled. “My family speaks Spanish. You know the basics?”

“Yeah, I have a B in there,” Eleanor said as she threw the volleyball into the container and packed up her stuff.

“Cool, cause if you were to ever come over you know, you’d need to know a little,” he said, throwing his backpack over his shoulder. Did Ethan just invite me over in a: I-invited-you-but-also-didn’t kind of way?

“I really like your wolf keychain. It’s cool. Is it hand carved?” Eleanor asked.

He hooked it off his bag. “Yeah. My brother taught me how to carve wood into shapes when I was little. It just developed from there. It’s actually really calming for me. Do you want this? I could make another one later,” he said, offering the keychain to her.

“I’d love it actually,” Eleanor said. He handed it to her and waved as the bell rung and headed out the gym’s double wide metal doors. Eleanor went to French and sat down in the corner window seat. She looked at the thin silver chain she wore around her neck and started prying open the little clasp that held the wolf to the keychain. She connected the wolf to her necklace and smiled.

“Eleanor! Would you like to answer my question?” Mr. Pérez boomed.

Her face paled and her mouth grew dry. She looked up at the board and saw a sentence in English. The apple is rotten.

“La manzana está podrida,” Eleanor said with a twinge of questioning.

Mr. Pérez smiled. “Correct.” He continued teaching, given a few interruptions of noisy students; fairly happier. Eventually the final bell shrieked through the halls of Clearview High, releasing a flood of students eager for the weekend. Eleanor, still clutching the smooth wooden wolf keychain in her pocket, navigated the crowded hallway towards the main exit. Her mind kept replaying her awkward but undeniably charged interaction with Ethan in gym. Geometry and French had been a blur of numbers and verb conjugations, overshadowed by the memory of his intense gaze and that almost-invitation. As she rounded the corner near the art room, she collided with someone, sending a stack of what felt like very heavy textbooks tumbling to the floor.

"Whoa, easy there," a voice chuckled.

Eleanor looked up, flustered. Standing before her was a guy with a striking resemblance to Ethan. He had the same sharp, angular features and dark, intense eyes, but there was a playful glint in his that Ethan's hadn't quite possessed. This guy's hair was longer, falling in loose waves around his face, and he had a cocky, almost arrogant smirk playing on his lips.

"Oh, sorry! I wasn't looking," Eleanor stammered, bending down to help gather the scattered books.

"No worries, happens to the best of us," he said, his fingers brushing hers as they both reached for the same volume of Advanced Ceramics. "You must be new around here... or I am, again. I'm usually off doing… pack things." He winked, a gesture that felt deliberately charming.

Eleanor frowned slightly. "Pack things?"

He grinned, his white canine teeth just as noticeable as Ethan's had been, maybe even a touch more pronounced. "Yeah, you know. Wolf stuff." He said it with such blatant flirtatious exaggeration that Eleanor wasn't sure if he was serious or just messing with her.

"You look... familiar," Eleanor said, her eyes narrowing slightly as she studied his face. "Are you... related to Ethan? He's new too."

The guy's smirk widened. "Ah, you've met my brooding little brother, have you? Yeah, we share some DNA. The name's Gage. And you are?" He held out a hand, his touch warm and firm.

"Eleanor," she replied, shaking his hand briefly. Gage's grip lingered a fraction too long, his eyes flicking down to her lips before meeting hers again with a playful intensity.

"Eleanor," he repeated, drawing out the syllables. "A pretty name for a pretty girl. So, Eleanor, considering we had this… charming meet-cute, how about I make it up to you with a coffee? Or maybe something a little wilder?" He raised an eyebrow suggestively.

Eleanor felt a blush creep up her neck. Gage's flirtatiousness was so direct it was almost comical, a stark contrast to Ethan's more reserved demeanor.

"Um, thanks, but I was just heading home," Eleanor said, trying to sound polite but also wanting to escape this unexpectedly intense encounter.

"Suit yourself," Gage said with a shrug, his smile not faltering. "But you know where to find me. Just look for the other ridiculously good-looking guy with the questionable sense of humor." He gathered the last of the books and stood up, towering over her slightly. "See you around, Eleanor." He gave her another wink and sauntered off down the hallway, leaving Eleanor slightly bewildered and definitely flustered.

Wolf stuff? What on earth did that even mean? Was it some kind of inside joke? A band name? A weird club they were in? The way he'd said it, all wink-wink nudge-nudge, made it sound… significant. And a little strange.

Her fingers instinctively went to the thin silver chain around her neck, tracing the outline of the small wooden wolf. Ethan had just given it to her, a casual offering, a peace offering maybe after her foot-in-mouth moment about his temperature. He'd said his brother taught him to carve. Gage. So, this delicate little thing had been touched by both of them.

A strange feeling fluttered in her chest. It wasn't exactly romantic, not yet anyway. More like… curiosity. A puzzle piece that didn't quite fit into the normal high school drama. Ethan's burning touch, the sharp teeth glimpsed in his smile, and now Gage's cryptic "wolf stuff." It was all… odd. Intriguing, in a way that made the usual drone of her thoughts a little quieter.

She tightened her grip on the necklace. It felt cool against her skin, a small, tangible link to the two brothers who had suddenly appeared in the predictable landscape of Clearview High. Was there something more to them than just being the ridiculously good-looking new guys? Gage's flirtatious confidence felt like a mask, maybe hiding something just as unusual as whatever Ethan was keeping under wraps.

Wolf stuff. The words echoed in her mind. She shook her head slightly, a small, involuntary shiver tracing down her spine. Whatever it was, she had a feeling her quiet, cloudy world was about to get a whole lot more complicated. And maybe, just maybe, a little bit brighter too. Or maybe a lot darker. She wasn't sure which yet.

Eleanor lingered by her locker, pretending to organize its cluttered interior. The wolf pendant, now nestled against her collarbone, felt like a warm secret. She couldn't shake the unease sparked by Gage's comment and Ethan's subsequent defensiveness. She’d hoped to catch a glimpse of one of them before leaving, a silent attempt to decipher the enigma they presented.

As the hallways grew quieter, with only the distant echo of janitorial carts and the occasional lingering teacher, Eleanor heard voices drifting from the direction of the rarely used science prep room. Curiosity overriding her caution, she moved silently towards the sound. The door was slightly ajar.

"…she's wearing it," Gage said, his tone laced with a familiar teasing edge. "You gave a human a piece of yourself, little brother? Breaking protocol already?"

Ethan's voice was low and guarded. "It was just a keychain. A carving. Don't make more of it than it is."

"Oh, I'm sure," Gage drawled, the sarcasm thick in his tone. "And the way you looked at her in gym? Purely platonic, I'm sure. All those layers you were supposedly wearing couldn't hide the… interest."

Eleanor's breath caught. They were talking about her. Ethan was interested?

"She's… different," Ethan repeated, the same quiet defensiveness she'd heard earlier.

Gage snorted. "Different how? Because she didn't throw herself at your feet like half the girls in this school? Trust me, they all want the mysterious, brooding new guy."

"She didn't… pry," Ethan insisted. "She just… accepted the keychain. Didn't ask a million questions."

"And now she's wearing it around her neck," Gage countered, his voice laced with amusement. "That's not acceptance, little brother. That's… a statement. A connection. One you initiated."

There was a brief silence. Eleanor could almost feel the tension crackling between them, even through the closed door.

"It's nothing," Ethan said finally, his tone flat. "Just a keychain."

"Right," Gage said, the disbelief evident. "Just like my sudden urge to invite every pretty human girl I bump into for a 'wild' coffee is just me being friendly." He chuckled. "Speaking of which…"

"Don't change the subject," Ethan cut him off, his voice sharper now. "Stay away from her, Gage."

"Why? Afraid I'll steal your… human pet?" Gage's tone was light, but there was an underlying challenge in his words. "Besides, who says she's yours to begin with?"

Eleanor's heart pounded. Gage had met her. And Ethan clearly didn't want him interacting with her. What was going on? This wasn't just about a keychain or a fleeting attraction. There was something deeper, something territorial, even.

She backed away silently from the prep room door, her mind reeling. The casual flirtation from Gage after school now took on a whole new meaning. He hadn't just been being friendly; there was a deliberate edge to his words, a teasing jab aimed at Ethan.

Clutching the wolf pendant, Eleanor slipped out of the deserted hallway and into the cool evening air. The sky was a bruised purple and orange, mirroring the turmoil in her chest. The mystery surrounding the new brothers had just intensified, and she had a sinking feeling that she was somehow caught in the middle of it.

Chapter Two

The silence of Eleanor’s house always felt heavier on the weekends. With her older brother, Liam, away at college, and her younger sister, Chloe, usually lost in the brightly colored world of her video games, the quiet amplified the absence of her mother. Her dad, bless his well-meaning heart, tried to fill the gaps, but his attempts often felt like well-rehearsed lines in a play they were all just trying to get through. His girlfriend, Carol, was… nice enough, in a bland, inoffensive sort of way, but their interactions rarely went beyond polite small talk.

That evening, dinner was a subdued affair. Her dad recounted a minor fender-bender at work, Chloe narrated the latest exploits of her pixelated avatar, and Carol offered a few generic comments about the weather. Eleanor picked at her lasagna, the image of Ethan’s guarded expression and Gage’s taunting words replaying in her mind. She found herself absently touching the wolf pendant beneath her shirt, a tangible reminder of the strange undercurrents swirling beneath the surface of her newly complicated life.

“Everything alright, El?” Her dad’s voice, laced with his usual gentle concern, pulled her from her thoughts.

Eleanor offered a weak smile. “Yeah, just… tired.”

He nodded understandingly. He knew her quiet moods, the lingering shadows that sometimes clung to her. He wouldn't push. That was one of the things she appreciated about him.

Later, lying in bed, the moonlight painting silver stripes across her floor, Eleanor replayed the overheard conversation. Stay away from her, Gage. Ethan’s low warning echoed in her ears. Why? What did Gage stand to do? And what was so significant about the wolf keychain, this simple piece of carved wood?

Sleep came fitfully, filled with fragmented images of sharp teeth, intense eyes, and hushed whispers in dimly lit hallways.

The next morning, the familiar routine of getting ready for school felt strangely surreal. As she chose her outfit, her fingers brushed against the silver chain. She hesitated for a moment, considering leaving the pendant at home. But a stubborn sense of curiosity, mixed with a touch of defiance, won out. She tucked it under her shirt, a secret talisman against the unknown.

The drive to Clearview High was filled with her usual mix of anxieties about pop quizzes and social landmines, but now a new layer had been added – the enigma of the two brothers. She found herself watching the other students as they milled around outside the school, a subtle paranoia creeping in. Were there others like Ethan and Gage? Were the hushed conversations and lingering glances she sometimes noticed actually something more?

Stepping through the front doors of the school felt like entering a stage set for a play she hadn't read. Every familiar face seemed potentially significant, every casual interaction possibly laced with hidden meanings. She scanned the crowded hallways, a silent search for the intense gaze of Ethan or the cocky smirk of Gage.

She spotted Gage first, leaning against a bank of lockers, surrounded by a small group of admiring students. He caught her eye and offered a wide, charming smile, a deliberate echo of their encounter on Friday. Eleanor offered a curt nod in return, a flicker of unease tightening her chest. His easy confidence now felt… calculated.

Then, she saw Ethan. He was standing alone near the entrance to the library, his posture as usual – slightly withdrawn, observant. Their eyes met briefly, and his expression was unreadable, a stark contrast to the almost predatory intensity she’d glimpsed in the gym. This time, there was a flicker of something else there, too. Subtle attraction. As if he was trying to pull her closer with his eyes.

He took a hesitant step forward, his eyes locked on hers. The noise of the hallway seemed to fade, the sounds of laughter and locker slams becoming a muted backdrop to this silent exchange.

"Eleanor," he said, his voice low, barely audible above the surrounding clamor. It was the first time he’d addressed her by name outside of Coach Miller’s roll call. The sound of it, spoken in his deep rumble, sent a strange shiver down her spine.

She found herself moving almost instinctively, a few steps closer, drawn by that unspoken pull. "Ethan," she replied, her own voice a little shaky.

Before either of them could say more, Gage’s arm snaked around Ethan’s shoulders, pulling him slightly away. "Brooding so early in the morning? You'll scare away all the… admirers," Gage said with a playful smirk, his eyes flicking to Eleanor with a knowing glint. It was a clear, possessive gesture, a subtle claiming of his brother's attention.

Ethan’s jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. He glanced back at Eleanor, a fleeting look of what might have been apology in his eyes before Gage steered him further into the flow of students.

"Morning, Eleanor," Gage called out with a charming smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes. "Sleep well?" There was a subtle undercurrent to his tone, a hint that he remembered their brief encounter and was perhaps testing her reaction.

Eleanor simply nodded, her gaze still fixed on Ethan’s retreating figure. The brief connection they’d shared had been broken, replaced by the unsettling presence of his brother and the unspoken tensions between them.

"See you around," Gage added, before disappearing into the crowd with Ethan in tow.

Eleanor stood there for a moment, the echoes of their short exchange swirling in her mind. Ethan's subtle pull, Gage's possessiveness, the warning in the science prep room – it all painted a confusing picture. Whatever was happening in Clearview High, it was far more intricate than she could have imagined, and she had a feeling she was standing right on the edge of something wild.

Gage’s blatant interest was… perplexing. He was undeniably attractive, radiating a confident charm that many of the girls at Clearview High seemed susceptible to. His flirtatious remarks, though sometimes bordering on arrogant, held a certain playful allure. Part of Eleanor, the part that had always felt a little invisible, found a strange, unsettling validation in his direct attention. He wanted her, and he wasn't shy about it.

But his reasoning… that was the confusing part. Afraid I’ll steal your human pet? What did he mean ‘human’? As if they weren’t humans… The possessiveness in his tone, directed at Ethan, felt less like genuine interest in Eleanor and more like a territorial game between the brothers. It left a bitter taste in her mouth, a sense of being a pawn in a dynamic she didn't understand.

Despite this unease, a flicker of rebellious curiosity stirred within her. If Gage saw her as something to be won, a challenge to Ethan, then maybe there was more to this than she initially thought. Maybe getting closer to one brother would inadvertently reveal the secrets of both.

The chaotic energy of the school cafeteria during lunch felt like a stark contrast to the hushed intensity of her thoughts. She scanned the crowded tables, her gaze searching for the familiar dark hair of either Ethan or Gage. She spotted Gage first, holding court at a table near the window, surrounded by a small group laughing at one of his undoubtedly charming remarks. Ethan was nowhere in sight.

A sudden resolve hardened within Eleanor. She wasn't going to let Gage's games or Ethan's guarded silence dictate her next move. She needed answers, or at least a better understanding of the strange undercurrents surrounding these two brothers.

Then she saw him. Ethan was sitting alone at a table tucked away in a quieter corner near the back, his gaze fixed on something outside the window. He looked almost… lonely. This solitary image resonated with the outsider feeling Eleanor often carried herself.

Taking a deep breath, she started her approach. She moved with a casual purpose, weaving through the maze of tables and chattering students, her eyes fixed on Ethan. As she drew closer to Gage’s table, he noticed her.

“Well, look who it is,” Gage called out, his voice smoothly cutting through the surrounding noise. “Eleanor. Fancy seeing you over this way. Come join the fun.” He gestured to the empty seat beside him with a confident smile.

Eleanor offered a polite but firm shake of her head, her focus unwavering. “Thanks, Gage, but I was actually hoping to talk to Ethan for a minute.”

Gage’s smile faltered, a flicker of surprise – and perhaps a hint of annoyance – crossing his features. “Ethan? He’s being his usual antisocial self over there. What could you possibly need to talk to him about?”

Ignoring the subtle challenge in his tone, Eleanor continued towards Ethan’s table. She could feel Gage’s eyes on her back, a silent question mark hanging in the air.

Reaching Ethan’s table, she pulled out the empty chair opposite him and sat down. He looked up, a flicker of surprise mirroring her own from his usually impassive expression.

“Hey,” Eleanor said, trying to keep her voice casual despite the nervous flutter in her stomach. “Got a minute?”

Ethan’s gaze flickered from her to where Gage was watching them with a narrowed expression, then back to her. A hint of something unreadable flickered in his eyes before he nodded slowly.

"Hey. That wolf keychain you gave me… Gage made a comment about 'wolf stuff' after school on Friday. What's that about?" She watched his reaction closely, noting the subtle tightening of his jaw.

Ethan's eyes flickered towards Gage's table, where his brother was now openly staring, a smug expression plastered on his face. Ethan's gaze hardened momentarily before returning to Eleanor. "It's… nothing. Just a family thing." His tone was dismissive, but there was a flicker of something else beneath the surface – annoyance? Wariness?

Eleanor wasn't one to back down easily, especially when her curiosity was piqued. "Family thing that involves cryptic warnings about keeping your distance from me?"

Ethan's eyes widened slightly, a hint of surprise flashing across his features. He hadn't expected her to have overheard that. He hesitated for a moment, clearly weighing his words. "He… he's just protective."

"Protective," Eleanor repeated, a skeptical edge to her voice. "Or territorial? Because the vibe I got was less 'concerned big brother' and more… 'stay away from my toy'." She tilted her head slightly, her gaze unwavering. "And speaking of territorial, Gage also seemed pretty intent on… winning me over. Is that just brotherly competition, or is there something genuinely going on there?"

Ethan's expression shifted, a mixture of frustration and something that might have been a suppressed smile flickering across his lips. He ran a hand through his bunned hair, a nervous gesture. "Gage… Gage likes to… have fun. Don't take him too seriously."

"Fun that involves deliberately trying to get between two people who've had, like, two whole conversations?" Eleanor raised an eyebrow. "It feels a little… pointed."

The tension between them thickened, the unspoken weight of their shared secret – Ethan's unusual heat, the sharp teeth, the "wolf stuff" – hanging in the air. Gage continued to watch them, his smile now a thin, almost predatory line.

Ethan leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping even lower. "Look, Eleanor… there are things you wouldn't understand. Gage… he has his own way of doing things. Just… be careful."

"Careful of what?" Eleanor pressed, her gaze locked on his. "Careful of him? Or careful of… you?"

Ethan's eyes flickered again, this time with a hint of something darker, something that sent a shiver down Eleanor's spine despite the warmth of the cafeteria. He opened his mouth to speak, but before he could, Gage pushed himself away from his table and strolled over, a forcedly casual smile on his face.

"Everything alright here?" Gage asked, his arm slinging possessively around Ethan's shoulders. His eyes, however, were fixed on Eleanor, a silent warning in their depths. "Just catching up with the latest obsession, little brother?"

The air crackled with unspoken tension, a triangle of veiled intentions and burgeoning secrets. Eleanor knew, with a certainty that settled deep in her bones, that her life in Clearview was about to become anything but clear.

Chapter Three

The week crawled by, each day a strange mix of mundane classes and lingering undercurrents. Eleanor found herself constantly aware of Ethan and Gage, their presence in the hallways a palpable tension. Ethan maintained a guarded distance, his brief moments of intense eye contact leaving her both intrigued and slightly unsettled. Gage, on the other hand, was a persistent, charming shadow, his flirtatious banter a constant reminder of the unspoken rivalry between the brothers. Eleanor found herself caught in the middle, a reluctant point of focus in their enigmatic dynamic.

Friday afternoon, as the promise of the weekend hung in the air, Maya and Chloe, two girls from her English class whose names she knew and they knew her brother but with whom she rarely socialized, approached her by her locker. Maya, with her bright pink streaks and infectious laugh, was the more outgoing of the pair. Chloe, quieter and more reserved, usually echoed Maya’s enthusiasm.

“Hey, Eleanor!” Maya chirped, leaning against the adjacent locker. “We’re thinking of heading out to Miller’s Creek tomorrow. You know, do some four-wheeling, maybe some of the guys are bringing their motorcycles. Wanna come?”

Chloe nodded eagerly beside her. “It’ll be fun! Get out of Clearview for a bit.”

Eleanor hesitated. Her weekends usually consisted of quiet reading, maybe helping her dad with chores, a stark contrast to the loud, adrenaline-fueled activity Maya was describing. But the thought of escaping the suffocating atmosphere of school, the constant awareness of the brothers, was undeniably appealing.

“Who all is going?” Eleanor asked, a sliver of curiosity piqued.

“Just a bunch of us,” Maya shrugged. “You know, the usual crowd. Liam might even bring his bike if he’s back from his girlfriend’s.”

The mention of her brother was a small nudge towards normalcy. Liam, despite his frat-boy tendencies, was usually good company. “And… anyone else?” Eleanor asked, trying to sound casual, her gaze flicking down to the worn wood of her locker.

Maya grinned knowingly. “A few of the guys are definitely hoping you’ll be there. It’s always more interesting with new faces.”

Eleanor felt a faint blush rise on her cheeks. She knew Maya was likely referring to the general male population of their grade, but a small, traitorous part of her wondered if Ethan or Gage might be among the “guys.”

“I… I don’t know,” Eleanor said, genuinely torn. The idea of spending a day in the woods, away from the watchful eyes of the school, was tempting. But the potential for an awkward encounter with the brothers, especially if they were both vying for her attention, was less so.

“Come on!” Maya urged, nudging Eleanor’s arm playfully. “It’ll be a blast. Fresh air, some speed… way better than another boring Saturday in Clearview.”

Chloe chimed in, her quiet voice carrying a hint of genuine invitation. “Yeah, Eleanor. It would be really cool if you came.”

Eleanor took a deep breath. Maybe this was exactly what she needed – a day of normal teenage activity, a break from the weird events seemed to be swirling around her.

“Okay,” she said, a small smile forming on her lips. “Yeah, I’ll come.”

Maya whooped, throwing her arms around Eleanor in a brief hug. “Awesome! We’ll meet up at the old gas station on the outskirts of town around ten tomorrow?”

“Sounds good,” Eleanor replied, a sense of cautious anticipation settling within her.

As Maya and Chloe moved on to invite others, Eleanor leaned against her locker, the wolf pendant a cool weight against her skin. A day in the wilderness. A chance to escape. But a nagging feeling lingered, a sense that even in the open air of Miller’s Creek, she might not be able to outrun the strange pull of the new guys in Clearview.

The promise of escape hung in the air as Eleanor walked home, the weight of the school week finally lifting. The invitation to Miller’s Creek felt like a lifeline, a chance to breathe fresh air and maybe even forget, for a few hours, the intense gazes and cryptic warnings that had become the soundtrack to her days.

The familiar comfort of her house offered a temporary reprieve. Her dad was already home, the scent of simmering tomato sauce wafting from the kitchen – his signature Saturday night spaghetti. Chloe was sprawled on the living room floor, surrounded by the colorful plastic bricks of a Lego castle under siege. Carol was perched on the armchair, scrolling through her phone with a serene expression.

Eleanor slipped into the familiar rhythm of their evening. She helped her dad toss the salad, the crisp lettuce and vibrant vegetables a welcome distraction. Chloe, momentarily abandoning her Lego warriors, peppered Eleanor with questions about her day, oblivious to the internal turmoil Eleanor was trying to suppress. Carol offered a polite, “How was school, dear?” which Eleanor answered with a noncommittal, “Fine.”

As they ate, the conversation remained light and surface-level, a familiar dance of comfortable silences and predictable anecdotes. Eleanor found herself observing her family, the familiar patterns of their interactions a stark contrast to the unpredictable energy that seemed to surround Ethan and Gage. Here, in the warm glow of the dining room, life felt… normal. Safe.

Later, tucked into her bed, the normalcy of the evening began to unravel. The faces of the two brothers swam behind her eyelids. Ethan’s intense, searching gaze, the fleeting hint of vulnerability she’d glimpsed in his eyes. And Gage’s confident smirk, the playful yet unsettling flirtation, the possessive arm around his brother’s shoulders. They were like two sides of a strange, alluring coin, and Eleanor found herself inexplicably drawn to its mysterious shine. Her dreams were a jumbled landscape of shadowy forests and piercing eyes, punctuated by the low, resonant sound of a distant howl.

Chapter Four

The first rays of Saturday morning sunlight filtering through her window pulled Eleanor from the restless sleep. The memory of Maya’s invitation resurfaced a welcome beacon of normalcy. She grabbed her phone and shot a quick text to Liam: Hey, are you heading to Miller’s Creek today? What time and where exactly are we meeting?

While she waited for his reply, she headed to the bathroom. Eleanor’s reflection was a familiar one: slightly auburn hair, a shade that caught the light in warm, coppery tones, framed a face with wide, expressive green eyes that often seemed to hold a quiet thoughtfulness. Her build was slender, almost frail, a natural leanness that had always made her feel a little out of sync with the more curvaceous figures of some of her classmates. She wore her clothes simply, favoring comfort over trends.

After brushing her teeth with the sharp, clean taste of spearmint – the peppermint kind was an absolute no-go in her book – she pulled on a pair of well-worn, low-rise jeans and a soft gray long-sleeved shirt layered over a cream-colored undershirt. It was an outfit that felt authentically her, understated and comfortable.

Her phone buzzed. Liam’s reply was short and to the point: Yeah, leaving around 10:30. Old gas station on 31, just past the county line.

Ten-thirty. That gave her some time. A nervous flutter settled in her stomach. She was looking forward to the escape, the feeling of wind in her hair, the temporary reprieve from the Clearview High drama. But a small, persistent voice in the back of her mind wondered if escape was truly possible, especially when the source of her unease seemed to be lurking just beneath the surface of the ordinary. As she headed downstairs, the wolf pendant, cool against her skin beneath her shirt, felt like a silent promise of the unknown that awaited her.

Eleanor grabbed her worn leather purse from the hall table, its familiar weight a small comfort against her side. On her feet, she slipped into her old brown leather boots, the soft scuff of the worn soles a familiar sound on the wooden floor. There was a certain earthiness to her style, a preference for natural fabrics and muted tones that reflected her quiet connection to the world around her.

The drive out to the old gas station on Highway 31 was short but filled with a growing sense of anticipation mixed with a knot of apprehension. As she pulled into the dusty, overgrown lot, the scene before her was exactly as Maya had described – a cluster of four-wheelers and a couple of motorcycles glinting in the late morning sun. A group of teenagers, their laughter echoing in the open air, milled around, their weekend freedom palpable.

Her gaze immediately snagged on the two motorcycles. One was flashy and eccentric, a vibrant crimson with chrome accents that screamed for attention – undeniably Gage’s style. He sat astride it, a blonde girl Eleanor vaguely recognized as one of Maya’s more outgoing friends perched on his lap, her arms wrapped around his waist. They were laughing, his easy charm clearly working its magic.

The other motorcycle was a stark contrast. Older, black with silver-rimmed headlights that looked like watchful eyes, it exuded a quiet, almost brooding presence. The seat was surprisingly large, easily accommodating two. Ethan sat on it, his posture slightly apart from the boisterous group, observing the scene with his usual intense gaze. He hadn’t seemed to notice her arrival yet.

A wave of heat flushed Eleanor’s cheeks. The casual intimacy between Gage and the other girl, coupled with the sudden, unexpected sight of both brothers, was a jolt. She felt a familiar awkwardness rising within her, a desire to disappear. Her eyes scanned the crowd, searching for a familiar face amidst the sea of unfamiliar people.

Then she saw Chloe, standing slightly apart from Maya and a group of boys, looking a little lost in the energetic atmosphere. Relief washed over Eleanor. Chloe, with her quiet demeanor and easygoing nature, was the one person in this unfamiliar gathering she genuinely felt comfortable around. Without a second thought, Eleanor hurried towards her, a small, almost apologetic smile on her face as she approached.

“Hey, Chloe,” Eleanor said, her voice a little breathless. “Glad to see a familiar face.”

“Hey,” Chloe said very softly. “Ethan was wondering if you’d be here. You should talk to him,” Chloe smiled, hopeful for Eleanor and Ethan. Eleanor blushed and walked to her truck, sitting her purse down in the cab. Footsteps softly became more pronounced behind her and Ethan was at her side.

“You look nice,” Ethan said.

Eleanor looked down at her simple outfit and grimaced. “You don’t need to flatter me,” she said with a small laugh. Ethan looked at her and traced her body with his eyes. A wave of electricity flashed up Eleanor’s body. Eleanor bit her lip and crossed her arms over her abdomen. Ethan’s mouth pulled into a slight grin.

“Wanna go for a ride?” He asked Eleanor with genuine interest. She nodded and smiled. They walked to his bike, and he threw his leg over, patting the spot behind him for her to sit. Eleanor trembled as she got on, wrapping her arms around Ethan’s waist tightly.

“Good. Hold on tight,” Ethan smiled, revving the engine. He reversed out of the parking lot and waved to everyone. Liam looked at Eleanor with pleasant surprise, an approving smile, then he shot gunned a beer. The closest to brotherly love Eleanor would ever get. Ethan sped down the country road, cheering as he turned up the bike’s rattily sound system. Eleanor couldn’t help but smile as her wavy auburn hair flowed behind her, occasionally plastering her face via the heavy wind. Ethan pulled over to a small trail and cut off the bike.

“Follow me,” he said as he smiled. Eleanor hadn’t ever seen him genuinely smile. She trotted behind him trying to keep up with his quick pace. Eventually they reached a muddy bank with a surprisingly clean lake ahead. Ethan sat down in a small patch of grass, a few inches from the water. Eleanor sat beside him.

Ethan looked at the lake wistfully, “This is my favorite place in all of Clearview.”

“It’s beautiful. I bet it’s even better when it rains, the small drops breaking that crystal surface of water…” Eleanor trailed off, engulfed in the lake’s allure. Ethan saw an opportunity to mess with her. He cupped up a handful of water and splashed her. Eleanor looked at him angrily, then she smiled, enticing a challenge. She splashed a fairly large amount onto his jeans, laughing. Ethan grabbed a wet, sloshy piece of mud.

“Oh no you don’t!” Eleanor shouted as she kicked off her shoes and slowly backed into the lake. Ethan dropped the mud ball and laughed. He untied his shoes and dove into the water beside her, splashing her whole torso.

She gasped. “You are so dead.” Ethan laughed and playfully splashed her. Eleanor attempted to splash him back, but his arms locked around her waist. Eleanor looked up at him and bit her lip softly. She wrapped her arms around his neck.

“You confuse me so much, but I still want to figure you out,” Eleanor said, her wet hair stuck in small ginger swirls on her pale skin. Ethan was so warm, and all she wanted to do was hold onto him forever.

Ethan pressed his forehead against Eleanor’s. “I want you to figure me out, I really do, Eleanor.”

Ethan’s scent was intoxicating. It flowed through Eleanor’s senses like a euphoric drug. Her hand firmly grasped Ethan’s hair and her body involuntarily pressed against his, her back arching. Ethan caught a small whiff of Eleanor’s vanilla shampoo alongside her pheromones exuding off her wet, slick skin. Ethan leaned in and his lips were mere inches from Eleanor’s. Their breath entered one another’s airways, and they could no longer hold onto the bit of self-control they had. Eleanor pulled Ethan in, and he reciprocated fully. They were waist deep in cold crystal-clear lake water and soaking wet head to toe. Ethan let out a low guttural growl at the sweet taste of Eleanor. She groaned at the feeling of Ethan tightening his grip on her waist. The sky began to darken, and fireflies lit up the surrounding world, freezing their moment in time. They broke the kiss, and both took a deep breath in. Eleanor let her eyes flutter open. Her dark eyelashes contrasted against her ivory skin.

“It’s getting dark, come on. I’ve got clothes in a little compartment on the back,” Ethan said, still a bit breathless from their intimate exchange. Eleanor nodded. She was still in a daze. Ethan handed her a large band tee and some basketball shorts with a drawstring. Eleanor began to take off her gray long-sleeved overshirt. The gray shirt was firmly stuck to the cream undershirt. The sudden exposure made Eleanor shiver and then realize her lacy bra was quite visible. Ethan laughed and turned around.

“Shut up!” Eleanor exclaimed, making a point to get dressed quickly. She hopped on the bike and wrapped her arms around Ethan’s abs, once again. This time they were much more defined in the wetness of his tee shirt. They arrived back at the meet up point and saw that Gage and his lady, Maya, and Chloe had all left. Liam was still drinking with his girlfriend on his lap. Eleanor was wet-haired and tired. She went up to Liam’s cooler and grabbed two beers. For herself only.

“If dad asks, I was never here,” Liam said. He let out a drunken laugh. Eleanor nodded in acknowledgement.

“I’m thirsty,” Eleanor said defensively against Ethan’s judgmental eyes.

“Just be careful, I don’t want to have to drag you home blacked out,” he said with a caring tone.

Eleanor laughed, “Ethan… it’s two beers.” Ethan smiled and let her chug contently. Eleanor was clearly buzzed, but thankfully not terrible.

“Ella, we need to head home…” Ethan whispered in Eleanor’s ear. She nodded and headed towards her truck.

“No way in hell am I letting you drive home. I’ll drive you home and come get my bike back tomorrow,” Ethan stated clearly, leaving no room for negotiation. Eleanor scoffed and went to the passenger side. Ethan walked up to Liam.

“You’re her brother, right?” Ethan said sternly.

“Hm? Yeah. Why, man?” Liam said, holding his girlfriend intently.

Ethan grimaced at his drunkenness. “Let her dad know she’s at a friend’s. If she got caught, she’d be grounded for years.” Liam simply nodded and Ethan went to the truck and fired it up. Eleanor was sound asleep, so Ethan buckled her up and headed for his house. Ethan unbuckled Eleanor after the slow drive home and took her inside, laying her in his bed. Ethan covered her up and left to go to sleep on the couch, exhausted and confused with his obsession over her. This was only the start of a very long and confusing relationship between two people from two very different worlds.

Chapter Five

Eleanor’s eyelids fluttered open, met by the soft glow of early morning light filtering through a window she didn’t recognize. A luxurious warmth enveloped her, the sensation of silk sheets slick against her skin a stark contrast to her usual worn cotton. She stretched languidly, a feeling of deep, dreamless sleep still clinging to her limbs.

Pushing herself up on her elbows, she took in the unfamiliar surroundings. The room was small but had a distinct personality. The walls were adorned with a collection of posters featuring bands she’d never heard of; their names a jumble of harsh consonants and distorted imagery. An old, faded black football t-shirt hung crookedly on the wall, secured by a couple of mismatched thumbtacks. The bedding was a study in contrasts: the deep navy silk sheets a stark backdrop to a thinner, black comforter that lay rumpled at the foot of the bed. It felt… Ethan.

A sense of disorientation washed over her. How had she gotten here? The last thing she clearly remembered was the lingering buzz of the two beers and the comforting darkness of her truck’s passenger seat.

Moving to the window, she peered out. The backyard was spacious and bordered by a thick line of trees. And then she saw them.

Three creatures, the size of small ponies, were engaged in what looked like a rough and tumble play fight in the dewy grass. They were canid, undeniably dog-like, but their sheer size was unbelievable. Their fur was thick and varied in shades of black, brown, and a startling silver. Eleanor blinked, thinking her still-sleepy eyes were playing tricks on her. These weren’t dogs; they were… something else. Their movements were too fluid, too powerful. The snapping of their jaws, though seemingly playful, held an undercurrent of wildness.

She watched, transfixed, trying to reconcile the image before her with anything she knew. They moved with a primal energy, rolling and leaping, their massive forms casting long shadows in the early light. One of the silver-furred creatures pinned a brown one to the ground, its teeth bared in a mock snarl, before releasing it and bounding away.

Then, impossibly, they began to shift.

The massive forms seemed to ripple, their shapes contorting and reforming in a way that defied logic. The thick fur receded, bones lengthened and rearranged, muzzles shortened, and limbs became more defined, more… human. In the span of a few heartbeats, the three enormous canines were gone, replaced by three men.

One was Ethan, his familiar dark hair now slightly tousled, his lean frame solid even in the distance. Another was undoubtedly Gage, his longer hair and cocky stance instantly recognizable. The third man was taller, broader, with a shock of sandy blonde hair. They were all naked, their movements carrying the same easy, powerful grace she’d witnessed in their animal forms.

Eleanor’s breath hitched. Her mind struggled to process what she was seeing. It couldn’t be real. It had to be a dream, a bizarre, vivid hallucination brought on by the beers and the strange intensity of the past few days.

Just as the shock began to give way to a dizzying sense of disbelief, the bedroom door creaked open. Ethan stood there, his eyes scanning the room, a soft expression on his face as he registered, she was awake. Then his gaze flicked to the open window, and his eyes widened, a look of dawning horror replacing the softness.

“Eleanor,” he began, his voice low and urgent, taking a step towards her. “You weren’t supposed to see that…”

But Eleanor wasn’t hearing him. Her mind was still reeling from the impossible transformation she’d witnessed. Yet, amidst the shock, a strange calm settled over her. There was no fear, no panic. Instead, an odd sense of wonder filled her. The pieces, the strange heat, the sharp teeth, the cryptic "wolf stuff," were clicking into place in a way that defied explanation but somehow felt… right.

Her gaze was fixed on Ethan, truly seeing him for the first time. Not just the attractive new guy, but something… more. Something ancient and wild and utterly captivating. A faint smile touched her lips, a smile not of fear, but of burgeoning fascination.

“You…” she whispered, her voice barely audible, her green eyes wide with an almost enraptured gaze. “You’re… a werewolf.”

Ethan’s face, moments before soft with relief at seeing Eleanor awake, now contorted with a stark terror that mirrored the frantic beat of his own heart. He stopped pacing abruptly, his hands running through his already disheveled hair.

“Shit, shit, shit,” he muttered under his breath, each word a self-inflicted blow. “I was so stupid. So reckless. Bringing her here… leaving the window open…” He turned away from Eleanor, his back rigid with self-reproach.

Suddenly, a shadow fell across the doorway. Gage’s head appeared, peering through Ethan’s bedroom window from outside. His usual cocky smirk was gone, replaced by a wide-eyed shock that mirrored Eleanor’s own, though his held a distinct edge of alarm. He disappeared from the window frame, and a moment later, he was inside the room, moving with a speed that belied his usual laid-back demeanor.

“Did she…?” Gage whispered urgently, his eyes darting between Eleanor and his brother.

Ethan nodded once, a small, defeated movement.

Gage’s initial shock morphed into a nervous energy. He ran a hand through his longer hair, a strange, almost manic grin flickering across his lips. “Well,” he said, his voice tight with a nervous laugh. “Guess the werewolf’s out of the bag.” He winced immediately, as if even he recognized the utter stupidity of the pun in this moment of crisis.

Ethan shot him a glare that could have frozen fire. “Gage, now is not the time!”

But Eleanor, still reeling from the visual confirmation of the impossible, was buzzing with a strange exhilaration. The world she thought she knew had just cracked open, revealing a hidden layer she never could have imagined.

“Werewolves,” she breathed, her green eyes wide with wonder. “So they’re real. That means…” Her gaze darted around the room, as if expecting other fantastical creatures to materialize. “What else is real? Vampires? Fairies? Gargoyles? Are they all just… hiding?” A thrill of discovery coursed through her, an almost childlike excitement at the sudden expansion of her reality. The potential for magic, for the unbelievable, was suddenly tangible. The fear that should have been there, the instinct to recoil from something so clearly outside the realm of normalcy, was strangely absent, replaced by an insatiable curiosity.

{This story is still in progress, thank you for reading this far. Feel free to leave comments on what you think of it so far! If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I, once again, thank you for taking the time to read this!}

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rubbersoul wrote a review Review · Aug 8, 2025

hey there! :]

Immediately, the first scene anchors any reader in a physical space and an emotional state. It sets a mood, place, and focal point quickly. Sensory details are the most effective hook because they're both descriptive and something most readers will intuitively understand--especially something realistic like a school setting!--so that is a very strong point of this story! The descriptions throughout are written very well, e.g. the "wolf stuff" hook. It's heavy-handed in the early chapters, but that makes sense for the supernatural since there needs to be some context. Everyone has different interpretations, so I understand that!

Structurally, you might want consider spacing these out so each hint gets its own setup-payoff cycle rather than layering them back-to-back. I think the rapid clustering could peak the reader’s curiosity too early; by the time the actual reveal arrives, it’s more *confirmation* than revelation. It's not entertaining / exciting to already know what is going to happen! Exposition is essential for these lore-driven plots, but there's only five chapters. The foreshadowing is heavy: heat, teeth, wolf carving, overheard conversations, and whatnot. The mystery can come slowly over time!

The chapters move very quickly as well, and the gym scene to the hallway encounter is an example of that. The pivot works in terms of story logic--meeting the brother immediately adds tension!--but the transition is abrupt. The shift from light flirty banter to mystery-laced conversation with a new character could be bridged, e.g. Eleanor’s thoughts / a snippet of her moving through the hallway before the collision. I would love to see more about who she is and what she feels rather than just her connection to other people. The intimacy spikes so soon, so it leaves little room for any romantic progression later on.

Speaking of the intimacy, the love triangle dynamic is introduced almost immediately, but right now both relationships are growing in parallel without much structure. I enjoy love triangles from time to time, but there needs to be a conflict between the interests for them to work. I'd suggest that you give Ethan / Gage alternating moments with Eleanor, so any reader allegiance keeps shifting. There's going to be positives for each character, and it shouldn't be obvious who the *good* choice is. I wouldn't mind seeing some competition between them either.

On a smaller note, you could expand on each chapter too, and it could be easier to review if each chapter was spread apart. I love to read long stories, but a lot of people could get overwhelmed with so much content!

I hope this helps you!

lina

creeperfeverdreams wrote a review Review · May 26, 2025

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!

Shalt we commence with the daunting S’more?

Top Graham Cracker - Eleanor is caught in between the mystery of Gage and Ethan, two brothers who couldn’t be more different from one another, all while dealing with her own problems and possibly trying to distract herself from them with the presence of the brothers.

Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I’m sure that there will be more of this later on, but I think that the personalities of the characters should be more developed, like Eleanor and the brothers. But I know that there’s going to be more later!

Chocolate Bar - I love how Eleanor isn’t terrified of the fact that werewolves exist and is more interested in finding out if there’s more magic out in the world, it really highlights her curious nature. I also like how you described the outside, especially when Eleanor and Ethan are at the lake, it brings in a more atmospheric vibe with what’s in the environment. Also, Gage’s pun at the end was charmingly funny!

Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a lovely set of five chapters to this story! What more of the werewolf world will Eleanor learn of, who is the man that Gage and Ethan were fighting outside, and what else lurks out there? Certainly, if werewolves exist, then other creatures must exist too, right? What will become of Eleanor and also, her family? And what happened to Eleanor’s poor mother? I am very excited to see more!

I wish you a marvelous day/night! ^v^



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