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Um...this is dead scary to me...but very well written. It's a classic pouring out of emotions and feelings and descriptions and imagery. I see a lot of potential in you. But keep in mind that it's necessary to structure your poem correctly, otherwise, it looks disorganized... Also, remember the capital letters and so forth. But other than that, I found this poem very interesting...Keep up the good work!