Published August 26, 2008
Why is it that all the tears
wind up in my eyes
why is it that all the fears
wind up at my side
why cant i escape them
why cant i hide
though my crust stays intact
it's tearing up my pride
i want to trust
i want to love
i want to see the truth
so why is it
that all i see
is you
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As i said before, you rock at poetry!!!! this is the best poem i had ever read!