I would like to think you are still here now
Perhaps you are smiling upon us all
You were the one who sat in dance class
You were the one who defended a victim
But the flowers have faded and color is lost
As the violets have withered away
Perhaps somewhere you wait for us
Those who knew you for a moment
Just to say hello and share a tale
Without hate or judgment you listen well
We return to the world in need of blooms
Of more kind and kindred souls-violets.
Violets that accept red and blue.
Without discrimination or fear or hate
Who love everyone in spite of the weather
Who can take in the rain and the sunshine
Who were relaxed enough to enjoy
But were not so lax as to condone hate
When the sun shines at the end of time yes
those violets will blossom again
For now though you lie in a coffin outside
And we are alive- missing a friend
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