Hi there!
So it's kind of tough to review this because I'm not sure what your purpose is. You've said you wrote this as a sort of tribute to this show you love, but it sounds like more than that. Rather than a tribute talking about how great the show is or how it's helped you, you spend most of this talking about how we ought to be more grateful for little things in our daily lives.
Assuming that's your purpose, you could change the opening to reflect that. Rather than saying "this is a tribute to this show," you could talk about how the show has made you realize there are things in your own day-to-day life to be grateful for. We'd get a better sense of your purpose and topic going in.
For the body, it might help if you painted some pictures from your own life. Is there any time a big celebration actually failed to uplift you, because a big celebration on one day didn't give your entire life meaning? What little things do you notice and give thanks for on an average day? The part where you talk about going out to connect to nature starts to give us more detail, but perhaps you could tell us about a specific time you did that - or at least what bad things you were thinking about that were helped by finding time for yourself.
A final note, because this sort of article always makes me think about this: be sure to consider people with mental health issues - going out in nature or thinking things through might not work for them! They may actually need medication or a set schedule/program to help them cope with things, and reading about how everyone's bad feelings can be fixed by communing with nature or whatever can just make them feel worse, like "what's wrong with me, why doesn't that work for me?"
You don't necessarily have to address it or at least you don't have to make it a major issue/theme of this article, but just be aware of it.
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