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Hey there thepapermonster. Just lizzy dropping by real quick to give you some advice, so without a further ado, let the reviewing begin.
Okay so you're sort of new but I'm guessing you've been here long enough to understand that every piece in the green room has to receive two reviews, before it is allowed to exit. I'm not sure what went wrong when you tried to post your chapter but there's nothing here except for a period. Semi-blank pieces like this one really mess the green room up, because there is nothing for the faithful GR Knights to review.
This leaves you with two or three options.
1. You can do absolutely nothing and just wait for another reviewer to circle back around and get rid of this piece. This option takes a lot longer to happen because everyone is going to be passing over a blank piece.
2. You could just delete this piece and have to bite the bullet with losing the 200 points. I know that hurts and nobody likes to do that.
3. Or you can edit this piece and re-post what ever you were trying to post here. To me this sounds like the best option. You won't have to wait a million years for a review or have to lose 200+ points on a single chapter.
Okay so that's really all I had to say. This piece has been bothering me for awhile but I decided it was time to get rid of it. I'm marking this as a review just to get the piece out of the green room.
Hey so if you have any questions about anything just shoot me a pm. I'd love to read your actual story so if you could link it to me if you decide to post it, that would be great.
Have a nice day.
Lizzy
The Queen of the Book Clubs