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Wonderful, wonderful work here. I love your light-hearted feeling! It's very sweet and charming. I like your format. I agree with MorningStar, that the fifth stanza is odd. I think it is the last line. You should change "Good" to something that rhymes better with your whole idea. Once again, You have a very very cute and happy little poem here.
Wonderful job!! I give you * * * * *.
Never stop writing!!
~Rainn
I adore this cute little poem! It's so light and fun. It's really refreshing.
The only problem I see with it is in the 5th stanza where you don't follow your rhyme scheme. It made me go back and read the stanza again to see if I missed something-- and you don't want that kind of a disconnect in your work.