Heyy! Forever here with a review!
First of all, this was a great poem with a use of a lot of positive techniques that helped the poem to become more lively. First of all you italicised the poem which gives it kind of a dramatic effect. I really like it. Secondly, you decided to avoid all sorts of punctuations and capitalization. That also did a good job representing the condition of the narrator. Like their brain is not in a very healthy condition and that is the reason why they have forgotten to put all those in their own places. Now, comes the metaphors. The use of metaphors was really incredible. Also, the same goes for the imagery.
About the interpretation of the poem, I really liked the concept of façade in the poem. It's a real problem of today's world and you have done a great job representing it.
Keep Writing!
~Forever
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