Inside of a Star [Chapter Four]

Hey there Syn3,

First of all: YAY CHAPTER FOUR!!!!!!!!
Second: I really loved this haha. I can't really find anything wrong with this grammar and spelling wise so yay. Anyways I loved the emotion and the details. It makes it very compelling and a nice read. My favorite part has to be this:

I kicked and thrashed my legs as hard as I could towards the surface, but there was nothing that could save me. How fragile one’s life is, I thought to myself, my body relaxing and turning rigid once more. I lay in the water, feeling like my legs and arms were on fire from kicking. I’m dying, and I know I’m dying.

I didn’t even tell Dorian that I was pregnant with his baby.

OMGGG!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! <3