Published August 3, 2008
Drink the ocean in one sip
Hold onto my goodbye forever
Call to make sure my feelings haven't had the chance to flip
Look out my window to see a galaxy worth full of new fish
Move the mountains from east to west
To make sure my tip toe step is in arms reach
What a surprise to see you trying your best
Such a smirking brain for such a smart smile
You're drowning me
In a glass box full of rhymes
Didn't you say you'd buy me the sea?
All I got was a pill full of sand.
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