Drink the ocean in one sip
Hold onto my goodbye forever
Call to make sure my feelings haven't had the chance to flip
Look out my window to see a galaxy worth full of new fish
Move the mountains from east to west
To make sure my tip toe step is in arms reach
What a surprise to see you trying your best
Such a smirking brain for such a smart smile
You're drowning me
In a glass box full of rhymes
Didn't you say you'd buy me the sea?
All I got was a pill full of sand.
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