Hi Shrishti and welcome to YWS!
It's a nice short article you have written here on a simple but a very important topic. You described the topic in brief in the first para and then went on to elaborate what it really means to achieve cleanliness. A step by step change that first starts with the person and goes on to bring changes around you. There's a lot of difference in just promoting this idea of 'Swach Bharat' and actually following a proper a lifestyle where we maintain a clean environment around us. It's quite a different scenario in the western countries where people are more cautious about these small things. But things are changing in India as well and we are becoming better every day.
The strong words at the end was also great. Overall it was a nice writing work with a noble message. Keep working on your writing talent.
Good luck
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