I consider this my 'first' poem, I have done some other ones but they were for practice and none were really finished. Critique!
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To lie in endless wait, I did
Beneath the airy sky tonight
With the birds flying their midnight flight.
Not a sound, not a wave,
Not a flap of wing gave
Not a tone of resonance,
Only the silence of the night
On its quiet, deathly flight.
In fields of shadows, I lied
For the moment to come,
The moment to ride
To take me away, far far away
Where no light comes forth
And all my dreams come forth.
Swirling colors of endless haze -
Take me away into an endless maze.
Far away as the eye can see,
Farther away where the mind can see
Anything that comes across it.
Sandman, come visit me now,
So I will lie as dormant as a plow.
So, now none has come, and all has fallen
For deep slumber was a-calling
To all those still awake tonight -
Fly away, and sleep alright.
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