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by savanahw
  • July 9, 2009
  • Short Story
  • Science Fiction

I deleted the story

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hopefulromntic
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hopefulromntic wrote a review · Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:32 pm

hey :D theres a few spelling corrections needed throughout the story but not much at all. besides that its pretty good goes into description of the horse and also explains a few things that people who may not be into horses wouldnt know so if anyone who doesnt know about horses can figure out from you telling them.
Also pretty good story so far. the horse with all the drawbacks and downfalls working hard to make it. I like it so far keep on writing love :)



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