come to me

by sar_a215
  • November 25, 2008
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Come to me and devour me
Swallow me up and drown
Fill your light with mine
and let us be together as one
ignited till eternity

Bind to me
Like I am your savior
Follow me because I am your lead
Obey me because I know

Trust me, because I'm all yours

Bite me like you own me
Claim me like I am the one

Drag me into the light
and hold onto me
because i will let go

Be my king and I your queen
Lord your dominance over me
Be a beast and roar

I sit by watching us fall
into a deeper, blacker abysmal hole

Come to me and devour me
Rip and break me
until I'm no longer whole

Come and watch my breaking soul.



eek.... i know its extremely choppy but yeahh please tell me how i can make it better because I have no idea how to fix poems- im a mega-amateur!

Thanks in advance

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