for F*** sakes, you make the rule, break it and won't obey it. i get it
but how can i win
you bitch about the effect and forget that you're the cause
how can i win
belittled again
their not your friends
that groundwork was just pretend
how do you justify the statues you had made of solid gold
once again your story's told
my muse
my source of duality
make life a mystery
i'll be the first to say it's me
not as my duty as a member of the gentry
just because it feels good to be better than you.
keep a smile
all the while
i clean my face of your random pile
one thing you're yet to prove,
human attitude,
desensitized
over dramatized
i f*****g hate it when you flat out lie
you won't let yourself see
too stuck to see
your words echo as in a carpet, like reverb;
yelling into berber
is as deep as your words can get
8
but i still listened, shut up and kept my place
when i have my own time and speech
you already know, can't really show
hear me out
that was my one and only courtisy i extend to you
one chance i let myself ask a queston of you
rhetorical, but question nonethelesss.
i'm gone whether it's answered or not
i'm gone
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