I wrote this to fit a couple of time signatures and metres. the first section...(Ceasless---until rationale is to fit a 5/4 time signature, the rest can go with a lax 6/8 or a rushed 4/4. A lot of emphasys
on syllables.) This is my first post enjoy...
Midland Law
Ceaseless…sloth and…slumber…
Abate…my mind…and it’s hunger!
I can’t wake from this
Monogenetic
Continuation
It appears
The eminence of a moral code is gone!
Recapitulate
The implicit facts
Of my existence
It contradicts
The absolute, and betrays my rationale
Ignis Fatuus!
Disillusion!
Disparity!
This is my kingdom and I’ll never need to heed your words!
Equidistant realm in between governed possibilities and sleep
No return!
Promulgate my Law to this place, disinheriting the human race
Watch it burn!
Apostatize into this new regime, differentiate the bull from sheep
No return!
Strengthening my omnipotence, affirmation of my dissidence
Create just to watch this burn!
My mind will never let me leave!
Between the devil and the deep blue sea
Bound to live out this surreal dream
Between the devil and the deep blue sea!
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