This is a poem I wrote today based on certain things I've been researching, reading about, and hearing through the news. I want to perfect it a bit--it seems rough in places--so comments and criticism are encouraged.
It's slam poetry style, so like all my slams, imaging a pinstriped blazer wearing chick reciting it to a roomful of drunk Bostonians.
Center of the Universe
I'm reading a magazine article.
A man from America
Raises low-income Chinese boys
For future possible positions
in the MLB.
And he can't pronounce their names.
Instead, he calls one "Soldier",
One, "Wanger", one "Shoeshine",
And he has one of his own.
"Asia's Embassador to Baseball"
Must have had a lot of work
Working here offseasons before
Starting full-time in 2007
Without learning to speak
China's languages
Enough to call his boys
"Zhu Songjun" or something.
But don't call me a whiner.
I'm an immigrant, too.
I can speak just fine
And overseas, I'm red white and blue
The issue goes deeper
It enters your school
Texas's Don McLeroy, Educational Chair-Ass,
Taking Asian-written books off the list
Saying only words like "Chow Mein"
Might be useful to kids
And maybe it's true for you, sir,
But maybe others want their kids
To go further than ordering takeout
When it comes to cultural bids
But I'm sure he meant well,
It's not like he knows that First Nations people
Were first starved then killed
Then their kids grew up forbidden
To say the same words their parents did
Whites are the visitors that took over the house
But still won't let anyone new in
It was just fine when they were slaves
But if you want a decent wage,
There's no room, look at Vincent Chin
Look at Trayvon Martin
The associations last longer than the martyrs
Black is bad, yellow is sin
Brown is gangster,
Even if you speak perfect English
You're 'acting white',
Trying too hard to fit in
It's different, Mr. Baseball
And here's the thing
The way you were born is the way you'll live
But people not like you, not like me,
Have to embellish their color, come up to your standards
And even then they won't be your kin
Do you get it? They have to be something more than their skin
To even get a moment's consideration before
That label is handed to them
Slavery was always there
Whites just learned to economize it
Built our empires like that
Kids kidnapped from fields
Even if they knew how to read
Mostly didn't live through the high seas
And if they did
They'd pick our tobacco and cotton
And that's where it's supposed to stop, but
You don't know their names.
They're hard to say,
Even if other cultures seem important
In the end--
Mickey D's, Nike, Kraft Cheese
Yours always gets its way.
Your country swells until it fills
All our bellies and you get free refills
While in the back they're working
Nonstop shifts and cutting their fingers with drills
Learn our language
Know your place
We're the Center of the Universe
Everything else is just space
Nothing in it, no planets
And sure as hell
Does nothing there
Have
A
Face.
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Yep this really hits home, man. I love the form this poem is in. So flowing and not a word wasted.
One, "Wanger", - I see you put an extra comma in here, just wanted to point that out.
The way you were born is the way you'll live. Wow that is so descriptive of Americans. I know you're probably from America, but the country is falling apart. It was supposed to be the melting pot, but none of the flavors will even mesh. I feel so bad for the people there.
Do you get it? They have to be something more than their skin - I see this the worst in Hollywood films. Black guys can never be the hero role. Except Will Smith. He's the only black guy that they think is white because of his ability. His acting makes him acceptable as a hero to them, but how long did he have to work to prove he could be white?
Love the part about free refills. This poem gets stronger and stronger as you go, rather than tapering off as mine have the tendency too. I could learn a lot from you. Thanks for this inspiring work!