life

by puppykiss1998
  • October 25, 2008
  • Poetry
  • Other

like sun is light and light is bright let it shine,life

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Catriona
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Catriona wrote a review · Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:11 am

Well this really isn't a poem (ok, it isn't a poem at all) it's more like a quote or something. It's really pretty, and could be a good idea for a poem, but it'll need to be a bit longer than that dear. Try reading some poetry and then maybe come back to work on this. I'll be looking forward to seeing it turned into a poem!!

~Cat



i don't want to pass up an opportunity to be authentic for the opportunity to be profound
— soundofmind