The story of the Joh--ril

chapter one flying lesson Jake looked out the car window. "Wow! This city stinks" he thought I can't believe that my parents chose this job offer their were other job offers in their area. Why couldn't they have chosen one of those. he wished he had not answered that phone call. he'd had been the one to answer the phone that lead them here. "Hello this is ray advertising" said the caller very snobbishly "may I speak to your parents." "of course" he said with an equally disdainful tone. Before the man could retort his mom picked up the other line. "Hello?" "Yes this is ray advertising inc." we have received your husband's application....." Jake hung up before he could hear the rest of the conversation. He had a bad feeling about what he heard. "Who was it" his little brother Nike asked "just another job acceptance." they were used to the cycle. Dad found work got drunk then got fired their financial situation looked bleaker every time this happened, Pretty vicious cycle. little did they know that this was the beginning of a adventure that would change there lives forever . "this is where we are living!" his little brother watt said disgustedly. "Until we find a house" their mom said with a tight fake smile her relationship with dad had been a bit strained ever since the cycle started "don't worry" said dad as he saw the hotel "we'll find a house quickly." the hotel they had pulled up to looked really run-down. and the smell was appalling, made you want your nose cut off. Everywhere there were signs of gangs and there was huge amounts of trash everywhere. and the pool it looked like some thing would crawl out of it. the lobby of the hotel was as worse as the outside. the hotel chairs were ripped and springs were sticking out of the front of them. "name" asked the reception lady with a growl. "Michael Aaron" "room 32 here's your key. call the front desk if you need anything ." from the way she looked at them they better not need anything. Jacob and his family walked down the hallway. Roaches scuttled around on they frayed beer stained carpet. there was loud bass music coming from one of the rooms and there was a stain covering the walls that looked suspiciously like blood. " were not going to eat here are we dear?" mom said a bit green. His dad hesitated just then a cat raced by with a rotten stake in its mouth and fear in its eye's. A pack of rats were chasing after it like a pack of wolves. His mom screamed and his dad jumped and cursed. " We'll eat out." The next day as Jake walked towards the bus stop a kid walked straight into him "Watch it pinprick," A burly 8th grader with tattoo's down both arms and eyes like voids growled. He was followed by what appeared to be an assortment of people from big hulks to small 7th graders who could steal anything they all sported bandannas with a white insignia on it. He quickly passed them then went to the spot in the line next to a quiet teenager, who stared at him in amazement and amusement. "Your pretty daring aren't you." Jake looked at him questionably " To even look at those guys is A death warrant, and now get the spot right next to the most unpopular kid in the school, me" "I don't care about popularity you might get some attention but in the end it's of no importance." Jake trudged wearily off the bus and got hit in the back with A pair of boots, he looked back and saw Oban waving on the bus he looked at the bus and saw his friend, Oban, waving at him he looked at the well used shoes befuddled. Then someone coughed impatiently behind him. He looked behind and almost peed his pants as twenty-four knives and twenty-four malicious grins sprung into existence. "Hello" my tormentor said with A knowing smile. "I forgot to introduce myself and the crew. My name's Bendan and this is my crew, crew this are target for torture this week." A dark chuckle ran through the group" Target this is A slow and painful death. today we will start destroying your pride then comes the fingers, then, well you get the picture, he grinned maliciously Also your friend on the bus provided an extra material, You have exactly ten seconds to put on those shoes and run boy, run like the wind!" the gang laughed with dark glee. In three seconds Jake got his shoes on, but failed to make it one yard towards the hotel before they jumped on him like a collective panther pouncing. even though he was six foot two he was no match for them. Bendan looked at the pool and grinned with a evil flicker in his eye he asked . "Do you like to swim?" Jake screamed for mercy. he got free flying lessons that day and said hello to all the little organisms in the pool when he entered the hotel the receptionist hardly paid him A glance his mother however was A different matter. "What happened to you!" she screamed as he entered into their dingy apartment. " I fell into the pool." which was true enough. "Go get changed" His mom commanded him sternly. "I don't want to see any of this gunk on the carpet'. she looked at the floor "On second thought it doesn't matter about the carpet just go clean yourself." as Jake took of his left shoe he a small protrusion on the bottom he pressed it and a compartment door swished open. There nestled in the compartment was a perfect replicas of a pair of Jedi lightsabers he chuckled and then chucked them over into the garbage. when they landed in the garbage he heard a swish and then a constant humming sound. he looked into the garbage can in interest and gasped, there at the bottom a three foot beam of light was emitting from one of the lightsabers. "No way." he breathed, then from the bottom of the right shoe came a voice that sounded suspiciously like Oban's "Hello? anybody there?" Chapter 2 getting of on the right foot "So your a jedi?!" Jake gaped in disbelief. "Jedi guardian apprentice to be exact." Oban said from the telecom "Did George Lucas have any idea......." "That he was actually describing events in my galaxy? No and he got two details wrong. Luke and Leia's mother had one more child before she died. he was sent into space in a ship designed to turn him to the dark side. I'll tell you the details why later, his name is Joh-ril and he has landed on Earth and only the force knows where in this backward planet he is." "Why me?" "Jake asked in curiosity. " you have a great presence in the force, also you are not entrenched that much in your society's troubles." Oban looked around nervously " Can you meet me at the back of your hotel? we need to go somewhere private so we can discuss my actions with the Jedi grand council. They will not be happy about the fact that you know about us, because earth is secret, only the Jedi council and select Jedi know of earth's existence so I might have to take you away from earth and send you to my galaxy."Why?!" Jake exclaimed. "earth cannot know that the galaxy their films star wars was talking about is real, and that the Jedi walk among them. That evening Jake grabbed the holocom and the light sabers and excused himself to the back of the the hotel where Oban sat waiting next to a beat up trash can and a weird looking motor cycle. "I thought you would not come ." Oban looked at Josh in surprise. "I was about to begin, you will need these." handing Josh what looked like your average pair of sunglasses.TO BE CONTINUED.

Please take into consideration when writing your reviews , This is written by a twelve year old.