Published May 16, 2011
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I really liked this. The tittle drew me in and i wanted to know more about this so I read it. It is to the point and as long as you think you made your point then well done. Over all i really like this.
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This is very good. Great structure and flow. It is very skilfully put together.
What drew me to this poem is the first place in the title. so good job on drawing me in.
Fantasy poetry is hard to write. It is a lot harder than fantasy prose because you need to strike a balance between keeping the flow and structure solid and also working in the story and fantasy elements. You do this very well.
In conclusion, good job.