I'm waiting for it to ripen,
freeing my mind from all cares
forgetting about my sin,
giving up all these shares.
It will bring suspense.
I withdraw in solitude,
grasping for the future -
of events I've cued.
You stumble so unsure.
Change is the key.
Apply yourself earnestly.
This is a partnership,
listen to me - to see.
Lets do this lip-to-lip.
You will be surprised.
This is the general destruction,
of the mutual pain.
We need to learn to function -
to keep us sane.
It will be better.
We are together
for better or worse,
when will it occur,
when we no longer curse -
Each others existence?
When the time is right,
I can change this.
Never stop the fight,
for that certain kiss. . .
that says everything's alright.
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