People who want to be friends should:
Tell them when something looks bad on someone
tell them if their jokes arn't funny
stop being a bossy idiot
stop trying to impress them
make sure to complement their new clothes
borrow and RETURN
not complain if u hate something to them
tell them you secrets
keep their secrets
go shopping for 5 hours without complaining
keep their chin up when their friend is happy
be sad if their friend is gloomy
TO BE A GOOD WRITER/ reviewer:
use adjectives
dont comment on little things likes spacing
comment on the whole draft
use constructive critisism
never try to find a mistake
acknologe they worked really had
comment that they should write more
use creative words
dont make them mad by saying their words arn't creative enough
study had to be an author
*moosie*
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If you remember only one thing about writing, then remember this.
Don’t cause reader fatigue.
“The Ball was hit very hard and elegantly by the boy.”
That passive sentence caused you to think a little.
“The Boy hits the ball.”
Your brain processes this sentence more easily than the first one.
It’s a tiny difference, but over the course of an entire document, passive writing adds up and causes reader fatigue. Your reader will feel tired and lose interest if you write too many passive sentences.
I know so many good writers who don’t take care of reader fatigue. Hence they are never able to attract readers.