Published May 18, 2012
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Hello again :3 Getting used to seeing me?
Let me start out by saying just how great you are at writing multiple poems that flow together. Once again, though, I thought it was short. I can't wait for part 5, though. The only thing I really saw wrong with this was in the first stanza.
Perhaps it should say "The games had begun". I just don't think "have" flows very well. Once again, very good job. Let me know when you post part 5! Patiently awaiting for the next poem, so until then, keep up the great work (Like I've said so many times before
And stay insane, all of the best writers are c:
--ForsakenAngel
awesome as always
This did not apeal to me, and I do not get what's going on here.
Thats why you should read Part 1 and Part 2! LOL!
Wonderful as usual!
thank you!