Published May 17, 2012
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Hello again! I'm back for more.
First of all, let me tell you how good this is. It went with the first one perfectly, but I personally thought it was too short. If his request hadn't been so vague, it might have added more body to it, though I'm not sure how well it would have flowed, depending on what it was he wanted, I suppose. Anyway, this is good, and like I've said before, if you need anything else reviewed/read, just shoot me a PM and let me know!
And stay insane, all of the best writers are c:
--ForsakenAngel
LOVE THE FIRST LINE! Beautifully written!
Whoops I meant stanza
thanks!
This is very good, at first though I didn't understand but when I read it more thoroughly I get it. I find it kind of disturbing in many ways like the line
"He hated demons"
"But now they are his friends"
Don't find much wrong with is but it isn't "Requuest" Reaquest*
Ain't used to giving reviews but hope I was a little help