Hello midnightdreary! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
I loved this. This was about the gradual fall into love, right? **cocks finger guns** ayeeeee
Overall:
Overall, I really liked, but your flow could be worked on by adding a few extra words. I loved the style that you chose. It was very unique and I've never seen it before.
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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