Optical Illusion
Maybe you're just a shining star
Peeking out from behind the moon
And maybe you're nothing but
An empty space
Maybe you're a miracle
That blew in the winds
that helped me out
you were someone that took me in
Yes maybe
just maybe
you don't exist
a part of my imagination
or from a myth
but maybe
just maybe
you're my hope
or mabye your just
an optical illusion
Like an oasis
Clear as can be
That pops up in my mind
And confuses me
Messes me up
When I'm on track
but I remember when you helped me
as I look back
Yes maybe
just maybe
you don't exist
a part of my imagination
or from a myth
but maybe
just maybe
you're my hope
or mabye your just
an optical illusion
what are you?
can you tell me now?
before you disappear
again
in my mind
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