Published June 7, 2010
You have red hair in your beard
Amidst the brown
Looking so much like that Tudor douche
Growing fat
Or in your case
More masculine
I prefer you
Did you know?
I think you’re decadent and delicious
And I don’t even care
That your shirt is too small
It would bother some people
That I don’t use punctuation
But it doesn’t matter
Because I know that I’ve worked hard enough
That you’d love me
No matter what
Thanks for writing me that recommendation
I prayed to God that I would be able to sneak a peek
To know what you felt about me
As a student
You told me yesterday, “You do good work.”
But I knew that already
I do it all for you and your beard
You work me half to death
I’ve had to hold you so long
You’re more like Henry VIII than I thought
But your name is Mark
And I’m not Anne
I’m Mary
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And you're quite random, you may want to stay on track more so next time? Eh?
Well, that was sort of random. It comes together eveentually, but until the end and until I've read it a few times I do not understand it.
nice that you made her like him and him be pretty neutral. That is the biggg issue in everyone's life.
I lovelovelovelove the ending. It ties everything together and i just sort of interesting.