Tudor Tutor

by maryletsflyaway

Published June 7, 2010

You have red hair in your beard
Amidst the brown
Looking so much like that Tudor douche
Growing fat
Or in your case
More masculine

I prefer you
Did you know?
I think you’re decadent and delicious
And I don’t even care
That your shirt is too small

It would bother some people
That I don’t use punctuation
But it doesn’t matter
Because I know that I’ve worked hard enough
That you’d love me
No matter what

Thanks for writing me that recommendation
I prayed to God that I would be able to sneak a peek
To know what you felt about me
As a student

You told me yesterday, “You do good work.”
But I knew that already
I do it all for you and your beard
You work me half to death
I’ve had to hold you so long

You’re more like Henry VIII than I thought
But your name is Mark
And I’m not Anne
I’m Mary

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silented1
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silented1 wrote a review Review · Jun 7, 2010

maryletsflyaway wrote:You have red hair in your beard
Amidst the brown
Looking so much like that Tudor douche
Growing fat
Or in your case
More masculine

I prefer you The i prefer you and the did you know, don't go too well togeather, there's no transition. It just sounds odd.
Did you know?
I think you’re decadent and delicious
And I don’t even care
That your shirt is too small

It would bother some people
That I don’t use punctuation Three cheers for randomness, bet let's try and make sense, eh?
But it doesn’t matter
Because I know that I’ve worked hard enough
That you’d love me
No matter what

Thanks for writing me that recommendation
I prayed to God that I would be able to sneak a peek
To know what you felt about me
As a student

You told me yesterday, “You do good work.”
But I knew that already
I do it all for you and your beard
You work me half to death
I’ve had to hold you so long

You’re more like Henry VIII than I thought
But your name is Mark
And I’m not Anne
I’m Mary

And you're quite random, you may want to stay on track more so next time? Eh?

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EmiAnne
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EmiAnne wrote a review Review · Jun 7, 2010

Well, that was sort of random. It comes together eveentually, but until the end and until I've read it a few times I do not understand it.

:arrow: nice that you made her like him and him be pretty neutral. That is the biggg issue in everyone's life.
:D I lovelovelovelove the ending. It ties everything together and i just sort of interesting.



You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things...
— Gone With the Wind