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by luminescence, SpunkyKitty, starlitmind

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Mon Jan 11, 2021 4:33 pm
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fleuralplants wrote a review...

Ahaha okay even though this is just about Minecraft, I love it so much.

It's cool how you managed to make a poem about a video game actually... meaningful? Deep? All of those things.

My favorite part is the first and fourth stanza- something about them is just special to me.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this! I loved it.

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Sat Jan 09, 2021 2:38 am
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izzywidgeon wrote a review...

Okay, I missed out on a pivotal part of my childhood by never playing Minecraft, but here comes a review.
I love the lowercase lettering, and the formatting, that's pretty cool.

My favorite line/stanza:

"i'll never be free/
of the lag that torments me."

- me on Zoom, lmao.

Okay, okay in all this is a pretty deep poem for a videogame, without the context, I would have thought it was about an oncoming apocalyptic future. I think this was really well done.



SpunkyKitty says...

Thanks for the review!

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Sat Jan 09, 2021 2:18 am
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MadilynReads says...

XD I love that ending though!

We are discreet sheep; we wait to see how the drove is going, and then go with the drove.
— Mark Twain