by luminescence, SpunkyKitty, starlitmind
Ahaha okay even though this is just about Minecraft, I love it so much.It's cool how you managed to make a poem about a video game actually... meaningful? Deep? All of those things.My favorite part is the first and fourth stanza- something about them is just special to me.Anyway, thanks for sharing this! I loved it.
Okay, I missed out on a pivotal part of my childhood by never playing Minecraft, but here comes a review. I love the lowercase lettering, and the formatting, that's pretty cool. My favorite line/stanza:"i'll never be free/of the lag that torments me."- me on Zoom, lmao. Okay, okay in all this is a pretty deep poem for a videogame, without the context, I would have thought it was about an oncoming apocalyptic future. I think this was really well done. <3 IzzyWidgeon
XD I love that ending though!
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