AFTER I READ YOUR COMMENT I READ AND READ AND READ AND READ MY POEM BUT I CAN'T THINK OF ANY WORDS OR PHRASE TO SUPPLY OR REPLACE TO WHAT I AHVE IN MY POEM
i GUESS ITS SHOULD BE HOW IT IS( IN MY OWN OPINION)
..BUT I'LL DO APPREACIATE IF YOU GIVE ME MORE IDEAS HOW TO IMPROVE IT. ITS QUITE HARD FOR ME TO REVISE OR REPHRASE IT BECAUSE THAT POEM JUST POPPED OUT IN MY MIND WHILE I'M HAVING A TEST.THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR SUGGESTING.AND NEXT TIME I WRITE POEM I'LL FOLLOW WHAT YOU HAVE SAID. l
PS. PLEASE HELP ME IN IMPROVING MY POEM ^_________________^
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